Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more grammatically correct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and reduce repetition. For example, say when you began the dream, what exactly you want to do in healthcare, and why.

Ví dụ: Yes. I can remember my dreams clearly. Since I was a teenager I have wanted to work in healthcare because I enjoy helping people in need; for example, I often imagine myself as a nurse or public-health worker caring for patients.

Gợi ý: Organize the response: give a direct answer, then one or two brief reasons. Correct grammar (family plural, 'interested in'). Avoid filler words like 'umm' and contradictory connectors. Use linking words such as 'however' appropriately.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually share my dreams with family and close friends because they support me and give advice. However, I keep them to myself with strangers. I am also interested in other people’s dreams and sometimes ask friends about their goals.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear opinion and one concrete reason with correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and repetition. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'therefore' to connect ideas. Be specific about how dreams motivate people.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they can guide people’s choices and motivate them to work hard. For example, if someone dreams of becoming a doctor, that vision may encourage them to study medicine and pursue relevant experience.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific, realistic steps and a time frame. Correct collocations (‘go abroad’, ‘study abroad’, ‘improve my language skills’), tenses and pluralization. Use one linking word to add a detail about how you will achieve it.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. One goal is to study abroad to improve my language skills and advance my career; to achieve this, I plan to apply for a scholarship and take an English course within the next two years.

× Absolutely yes, because when I since I was I'm teenager, I want to be a person who help someone need someone need help so I always dream about healthcare fields.

✓ Absolutely yes, because since I was a teenager, I have wanted to be someone who helps people in need, so I have always dreamed about working in healthcare.

This sentence has multiple structure and tense issues: unnecessary words ('when I'), incorrect sequence ('I'm teenager'), wrong verb tenses (present 'want' instead of present perfect 'have wanted'), singular/plural and verb agreement ('help someone need someone need help' should be 'helps people in need'), and awkward noun phrase ('healthcare fields' should be 'working in healthcare'). Suggestion: simplify the clause order, use 'since I was a teenager' with present perfect to show a continuing desire, use third-person singular verb 'helps' for 'someone who', and use 'people in need' or 'those in need'.

× Yes, I usually share my dreams with close friends or my families.

✓ Yes, I usually share my dreams with close friends or my family.

'Families' is incorrect because the speaker likely refers to their own family (singular collective noun). Use 'my family' or 'my families' only if referring to multiple distinct families, which is unlikely. Also 'close friends or my family' is parallel. Suggestion: use singular collective 'family' for clarity.

× Umm but otherwise I just keep my dreams.

✓ If not, I usually keep my dreams to myself.

The original uses 'but otherwise' awkwardly and omits the reflexive structure 'to myself'. The corrected version clarifies the contrast and uses the idiomatic expression 'keep my dreams to myself.' Suggestion: use 'if not' or 'otherwise' at sentence start and include 'to myself' when indicating secrecy.

× I don't talk about my dreams to strangers, but however I interest in other dreams.

✓ I don't talk about my dreams with strangers, but I am interested in other people's dreams.

Problems: 'talk about my dreams to strangers' should use 'with' for mutual conversation; 'but however' is redundant (use one); 'I interest in' is incorrect verb use—should be 'I am interested in'; 'other dreams' lacks possessive—use 'other people's dreams.' Suggestion: use 'interested in' and add possessive to clarify whose dreams.

× I think so dreams have special meanings.

✓ I think so; dreams have special meanings.

Punctuation and word order are incorrect. 'I think so dreams...' should be split: 'I think so; dreams...' or 'I think so. Dreams...' Suggestion: separate clauses and use proper punctuation to avoid run-on.

× Umm for example, people have a dreams, they can go forward to their dreams and make an effort to achieve their dreams.

✓ For example, when people have dreams, they can pursue them and make an effort to achieve them.

Errors: 'a dreams' mixes singular article with plural noun; 'go forward to their dreams' is unnatural—use 'pursue them' or 'work toward them'; repetition of 'their dreams' can be reduced with pronouns. Suggestion: use plural 'dreams' without 'a' and use verbs like 'pursue' or 'work toward.'

× This kind is kind of having a dreams can be a motivations to peoples.

✓ Having this kind of dream can be a motivation for people.

Multiple errors: word order 'This kind is kind of having a dreams' is incorrect; article and number errors ('a dreams', 'motivations' should be 'a motivation' as an uncountable or singular concept); 'peoples' should be 'people'. Use 'motivation for people.' Suggestion: rephrase concisely: 'Having this kind of dream can motivate people.' },{