Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự trôi chảy. Trả lời nên là một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai câu chi tiết. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: dùng thì đúng, sắp xếp từ), nối câu bằng liên từ phù hợp, và tránh câu rời rạc. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác cho hành động ghi lại giấc mơ (ví dụ: "write down").

Ví dụ: I don't always remember my dreams, but when I do I usually wake up and write them down in my notebook. This helps me recall details later and sometimes notice patterns in my dreams.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa cấu trúc thì và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ: "have a nightmare", "give me advice", "calm me"). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, rồi giải thích vì sao bạn chia sẻ và ai là người bạn chia sẻ. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như động từ nguyên mẫu/ quá khứ không đúng.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually share my nightmares with my friend and my mum because they give me advice and help calm me down. Sometimes they also try to explain why I had the dream, which I find comforting.

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện độ rõ ràng và từ vựng. Trả lời nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes/No and reason). Sửa lỗi từ (ví dụ: "dreams", "sometimes", "reflect my worries and emotions") và đưa ví dụ cụ thể, mạch lạc. Dùng liên từ để nối lý do và ví dụ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect my worries and emotions. For example, before an important exam I sometimes dream that I am unprepared, which shows my anxiety about the test.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tương đối tốt nhưng cần chỉnh ngữ pháp (thì, số ít/ nhiều) và mở rộng ý bằng một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích phương pháp bạn dùng và kết quả bạn mong đợi. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "sometimes", "helps".

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I want to make my dreams come true, so I set small, achievable goals to stay motivated and build confidence. For instance, if I want to study abroad, I first focus on improving my English and saving money.

× I don't always remember my dreams, but when I remember I. Usually wake up.

✓ I don't always remember my dreams, but when I do remember them, I usually wake up.

The sentence has missing and misplaced elements. 'when I remember I.' is fragmentary and needs 'do' as a pro-verb to avoid repetition; 'usually' should be with the main clause; 'dreams' requires object pronoun 'them'. Revise by using 'when I do remember them, I usually wake up' to form a complete, grammatically correct sentence.

× I jumped out in my notebook and tell.

✓ I write them down in my notebook and tell others.

The original uses incorrect verb 'jumped out' and missing object/time; tense and structure unclear. Use present simple 'write' to match habitual action and add object 'them' and 'others' for clarity: 'I write them down in my notebook and tell others.'

× Yes, when I had a nightmare I usually talk about it with my friend and my mom.

✓ Yes, when I have a nightmare I usually talk about it with my friend and my mom.

Tense inconsistency: 'had' (past) conflicts with 'usually talk' (present habitual). Use present simple 'have' for habitual situations. Pronouns are fine otherwise.

× They give advice for me and help me came or explain why I met.

✓ They give me advice and help me calm down or explain why I had the dream.

Incorrect preposition 'for me' (use 'give me advice'), wrong verb forms 'came' and 'met'. 'Came' should be 'calm down' if intended; 'met' likely meant 'dreamed' or 'had the dream'. Also change to past participle/past 'had' for the event. Use clear verbs: 'help me calm down' and 'explain why I had the dream.'

× Yes, I paid the room sometime have a special meaning because they reflect my worry and my emotion.

✓ Yes, I think some dreams sometimes have a special meaning because they reflect my worries and my emotions.

Original has nonsense 'paid the room' and incorrect structure. Replace with 'I think' for opinion; 'some dreams' plural; adverb placement 'sometimes'; use plural 'worries' and 'emotions' to match 'they'.

× For example, I meet check on the day, in the evening I met.

✓ For example, I may notice something during the day that appears again in a dream in the evening.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear: 'I meet check on the day' and 'in the evening I met' are fragments. Rephrase to show cause and effect: noticing something by day that returns in an evening dream. Use modal 'may' to express possibility and correct verb forms.

× Well yes, sometime I want to make my dreams come true.

✓ Well, yes, sometimes I want to make my dreams come true.

Minor adverb form error: use plural 'sometimes' (adverb) instead of 'sometime'. Punctuation improved; present simple appropriate for general desire.

× I try to set small goals because it help me stay motivated and confident.

✓ I try to set small goals because they help me stay motivated and confident.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it help' is incorrect. 'Goals' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and verb 'help' to agree: 'they help me...'.