Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and repeat words; answer directly with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams, but I mainly recall the bad ones. For example, I often wake up from nightmares and remember them clearly, while pleasant dreams tend to fade.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason with a linking word (e.g., because or so). Avoid awkward phrasing like “dream of me” and clarify who 'Father' is if relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often share my dreams when they are interesting. For example, I tell my father about vivid dreams because talking about them helps me reflect and improves my communication skills.

Gợi ý: Avoid slang and informal fillers (umm, gonna). Provide a clearer explanation and one specific reason or example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words (for example, because).

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect our worries or hopes. For example, if I have a bad dream I might wake up feeling anxious and think about that issue during the day.

Gợi ý: Organize your ideas into one topic sentence and 2–3 supporting points. Use correct verb forms and articles (e.g., 'build a house'). Avoid unrealistic phrases like 'travel the world without having money'—clarify meaning instead.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. For instance, I hope to build a house, become a better person, and travel the world; to achieve these I plan to save money and develop my skills.

× I I do actually, but I but in my case I only remember the dreams that are bad, not the not the good ones.

✓ I do, actually, but in my case I only remember the bad dreams, not the good ones.

Repetition and filler words make the sentence disfluent and the phrase order is awkward. Remove duplicated words ('I I', 'but I but', 'not the not the') and place adjectives before the noun ('bad dreams') for clarity. Use commas to separate the parenthetical 'actually'.

× First things first, yes, I do share my dreams with others if that dream of me is really good.

✓ First things first, yes, I do share my dreams with others if the dream is really good.

The phrase 'that dream of me' is unnatural; use 'the dream' or 'my dream'. This is a modal/context issue where 'do share' is acceptable for emphasis but the noun phrase needs correction. Use 'my dream' or 'the dream' to be concise and natural.

× And I also interest in listening to the dreams of Father because that can create or improve my communication skills by just sharing what I've learned and what I've experienced on that night that I was dreaming.

✓ I am also interested in listening to my father's dreams because that can improve my communication skills by sharing what I've learned and what I experienced that night.

The verb 'interest' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'interested' with the verb 'to be' (subject-verb agreement). 'Father' needs a possessive determiner ('my father'). 'On that night that I was dreaming' is wordy; use 'that night'. 'Create or improve' is redundant; 'improve' suffices.

× As a Filipino, yes I do believe that dreaming has a special meaning.

✓ As a Filipino, yes, I do believe that dreams have special meanings.

Singular 'dreaming' with 'a special meaning' is acceptable but sounds odd with general belief. Use plural 'dreams' and 'special meanings' to express a general belief about multiple instances. Add commas for clarity.

× Just like if you had a bad dreams, you're gonna be thinking umm bad thoughts before you sleep.

✓ For example, if you have bad dreams, you might think negative thoughts before you sleep.

Grammar issues: 'a bad dreams' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a'. 'You're gonna' is informal and contractions should be rendered properly; use 'you might' to match tentative meaning. 'Umm' is filler and should be removed. Use 'negative thoughts' for clarity.

× Yes, for sure. I want to build house, I want to be a better person, I want to be accepted by society without being judged and I want to to travel the world without having money.

✓ Yes, for sure. I want to build a house, I want to be a better person, I want to be accepted by society without being judged, and I want to travel the world without having money.

'Build house' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Remove duplicated 'to' in 'I want to to travel'. Add a comma before 'and' in a list for clarity. The phrase 'without having money' is odd but grammatically acceptable; consider 'even if I don't have much money' for naturalness.