Dreams— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct tense and number (a dream / came to Canada), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about the dream to enrich your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes. One of my biggest dreams was to study abroad, and that dream came true when I came to Canada to complete my course. It was important to me because it allowed me to gain international experience and improve my English.

Gợi ý: Open with a direct topic sentence and use linking words for clarity. Fix grammar (share with my parents; they motivate me). Add a brief reason or example of how they motivate you to show specificity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I prefer to share my dreams with my parents because they support and encourage me. For example, when I told them about studying abroad, they helped me find courses and motivated me to apply.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and follow with one or two specific reasons. Avoid fillers and improve grammar (work hard to achieve). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect our deepest wishes and goals. For example, someone who dreams of being a doctor might be motivated to study harder and pursue medical training.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear and complete response. Start with a direct statement (Yes, I do) and explain briefly why, using correct grammar and finishing your thought. Add one concrete step you are taking to achieve the dream to make the answer stronger.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really want to make my dreams come true because I want a better future and personal fulfilment. For instance, I am taking professional courses in Canada and networking with people in my field to improve my chances.

× Yes, one of my biggest and uh, real dream is to come come on abroad for studies and that dream come true.

✓ Yes, one of my biggest and real dreams was to go abroad for my studies, and that dream came true.

The phrase 'one of my biggest ... dream' needs plural 'dreams' because 'one of' refers to an item in a group. 'Come on abroad' is incorrect collocation; use 'go abroad'. Tense should be past 'was' and 'came true' because the speaker says it already happened. Also add 'my' before studies for clarity.

× Now I came to Canada and completed my course.

✓ I came to Canada and completed my course.

Using 'now' with simple past 'came' is awkward; remove 'now' or use present perfect 'I have come to Canada'. The sentence correctly uses past tense for completed action; simplification removes the tense mismatch.

× I prefer to share my dreams with others especially to my parents because when I had a good dream I shared with my parents that makes me so happy and they also motivate to achieve my dreams.

✓ I prefer to share my dreams with others, especially with my parents, because when I have a good dream I share it with them; that makes me very happy, and they also motivate me to achieve my dreams.

Use 'with' rather than 'to' after 'share'. Maintain present tense 'have' if this is a habitual action. 'Shared with my parents' should use object pronoun 'it' for the dream. 'Motivate to achieve' needs object 'me'. Also improve punctuation for clarity.

× Umm majority of the people dream about the wishes they had in their life and they work hard for achieve their dream so which make the life very meaningful.

✓ The majority of people dream about the wishes they have in their lives, and they work hard to achieve their dreams, which makes life very meaningful.

Add definite article 'the' before 'majority'. 'People' does not need 'the' necessarily but 'the majority of people' is natural. Use present tense 'have' for general truth, plural 'lives' to match 'people', and plural 'dreams'. Use 'to achieve' infinitive and 'which makes' (singular) because 'which' refers to the whole clause. Remove unnecessary words.

× Guess I really want to make my dreams come true, because I'm not.

✓ I really want to make my dreams come true, because I haven't yet.

'Guess' is filler and can be omitted. The clause 'because I'm not' is incomplete and unclear; replace with 'because I haven't yet' or 'because they haven't come true yet' to complete the meaning. Ensure tense matches desire for future achievement.