Part 1
Giám khảo
Can you remember the dreams you had?
Thí sinh
No, I don't usually remember my dreams. They disappear quickly after I wake up and I don't think much about them. I focus more on what I need to do during the day.
Giám khảo
Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to talk about my dreams with my friends and family. Sometimes they are funny or strange and it's fine to share those stories. I think it helps us understand our minds better.
Giám khảo
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
Thí sinh
Now I don't think dreams has special meanings, they are just random imments and thoughts from our brain. I don't remember my dreams often so I don't think there mean much.
Giám khảo
Do you want to make your dreams come true?
Thí sinh
Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because it makes me feel good and gives me a reason to keep going. I have some goals that I'm very excited about it and I try to work on them every day.
Can you remember the dreams you had?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但有语法小错误并且信息可以更具体。建议注意时态和单词形式(如 'disappear' 可以改为 'disappear' 的时态配合;'don't think much about them' 可用更具体表达),减少重复,用一至两句补充细节以丰富内容。可以在第一句加主题句,然后用连接词补充原因或例子。
Ví dụ: I rarely remember my dreams. Usually they fade within minutes of waking, so I focus on my morning routine and tasks for the day instead.
Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答清楚且自然,内容具体但可更精炼并使用连接词提升连贯性。注意避免泛泛而谈,可举一两个简单例子说明什么样的梦会分享,并说明原因(比如拉近关系或获得见解)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often share amusing or bizarre dreams with close friends and family because talking about them can be entertaining and sometimes helps us reflect on our thoughts or worries.
Do you think dreams have special meanings?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有意思但语法和词汇错误较多,影响表达清晰度。建议使用正确主谓一致('dreams have'),纠正拼写('imments' → 'imprints' 或 'imaginings'),并用连接词给出理由或例子以支持观点。改为两到三句,第一句表明观点,第二句解释原因。
Ví dụ: I don't believe dreams have special meanings. To me they seem like random imaginings from the brain, and since I rarely remember them, I don't read much into them.
Do you want to make your dreams come true?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 总体积极且内容清晰,但有小的语言问题和啰嗦表达(如 'about it' 多余)。建议用一到两句具体说明一个或两个目标以及你每天如何努力(比如学习、练习或计划),使用连接词提升逻辑性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Achieving my dreams motivates me, for example I want to become fluent in English, so I study and practice speaking for at least thirty minutes every day.
× Now I don't think dreams has special meanings, they are just random imments and thoughts from our brain.
✓ Now I don't think dreams have special meanings; they are just random imprints and thoughts from our brain.
语法问题类型:第三人称单数错误。原因:主语“dreams”为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“have”,而不是“has”。此外原句中“imments”为拼写错误,正确为“imprints”。建议:确认主语是单数还是复数,复数主语用动词原形(不加 -s),并注意单词拼写。
× I don't remember my dreams often so I don't think there mean much.
✓ I don't remember my dreams often, so I don't think they mean much.
语法问题类型:代词使用错误。原因:句中代词“there”错误,应该用代词“they”指代之前的“dreams”。此外需要在两个分句之间加逗号。建议:用正确的指代代词来对应先行词,注意连接词前后的标点。
× I have some goals that I'm very excited about it and I try to work on them every day.
✓ I have some goals that I'm very excited about, and I try to work on them every day.
语法问题类型:句子结构错误。原因:句中出现冗余代词“it”,造成结构重复且不通顺。应删除“it”,并在并列连词前加逗号以分隔两个独立分句。建议:检查从句和主句的关系,避免多余代词,保持并列句结构清晰。