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Part 1

Giám khảo

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Thí sinh

I think it's I'm a member of my dreams. For example, when I get up I'm often remember the my different dreams.

Giám khảo

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Thí sinh

Oh, this is a really good, uh, question. Uh, yes, I'm, uh, share my dreams with others, for example, uh, with my friends, uh, I often, uh, talking, uh, there because their dreams get me.

Giám khảo

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Thí sinh

The dreams is for me they really, uh, special meanings because it's really important for me. Uh, they can be uh, more beautiful and so, uh, both emotional.

Giám khảo

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Thí sinh

My dreams, uh, for is for me really special meetings because umm, in my dreams I was happy and uh, I want, I wanna to uh, to my dreams come true.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Can you remember the dreams you had?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Используйте простое прямое утверждение, исправьте ошибки грамматики и порядок слов. Дайте одно ясное предложение про память о снах, затем одно или два поддерживающих предложения с конкретикой (когда, как часто, какие мечты). Избегайте лишних пауз и повторов.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually remember my dreams. For example, I often recall different dreams when I wake up in the morning, especially if they were emotional or vivid.

Do you share your dreams with others? (or are you interested in others' dreams?)

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо, убирая междометия и заполнители (uh, um). Дайте короткое утверждение и добавьте конкретный пример: с кем вы делитесь, о чем говорите и почему. Используйте связки (for example, because, so) для логики.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often share my dreams with my close friends. For example, we talk about strange or funny dreams after school because they make us laugh and help us understand each other better.

Do you think dreams have special meanings?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Дайте ясное мнение (yes/no) и объясните причину конкретно. Используйте связующие слова (because, so, for example) и конкретные детали о том, какие значения вы видите (эмоции, подсознание). Избегайте неопределённых слов и пауз.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think dreams often have special meanings because they reflect our emotions or worries. For example, a recurring dream about falling might show that I am anxious about a new challenge.

Do you want to make your dreams come true?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо и грамотно: скажите, хотите ли вы реализовать свои мечты и почему. Дайте конкретные действия или планы, как вы собираетесь этого добиваться. Ограничьте ответ до 2–3 предложений, без повторов и междометий.

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true because they make me happy. For example, to achieve my dream of working abroad, I plan to improve my English and look for international internships next year.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think it's I'm a member of my dreams.

I think I'm a part of my dreams.

The original sentence uses awkward pronoun and structure ('it's I'm a member of my dreams'). Replace with 'I'm a part of my dreams' for a natural expression. Use 'part of' instead of 'member of' when referring to dreams. Ensure subject and verb contraction 'I'm' is used correctly.

Present tense issue

× For example, when I get up I'm often remember the my different dreams.

For example, when I get up I often remember my different dreams.

Use simple present 'remember' not 'I'm remember'. Remove the extra article 'the' before 'my'. Correct subject-verb structure: 'I often remember' is correct.

Modal verb usage

× Oh, this is a really good, uh, question. Uh, yes, I'm, uh, share my dreams with others, for example, uh, with my friends, uh, I often, uh, talking, uh, there because their dreams get me.

Oh, this is a really good question. Yes, I share my dreams with others; for example, with my friends, I often talk about them because their dreams interest me.

Remove incorrect use of 'I'm' before 'share' (present simple 'I share' is required). Change 'I often talking' to 'I often talk' (simple present). Replace 'their dreams get me' with 'their dreams interest me' for correct meaning and verb choice. Clean fillers for clarity.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× The dreams is for me they really, uh, special meanings because it's really important for me.

The dreams, for me, have really special meanings because they are really important to me.

Use plural verb 'have' to agree with plural subject 'dreams' (not 'is'). Replace 'it's' and incorrect pronoun with 'they are'. Correct noun phrase order: 'have special meanings' and preposition 'to me'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, they can be uh, more beautiful and so, uh, both emotional.

They can be more beautiful and also very emotional.

Replace awkward filler and 'both emotional' with 'also very emotional' for natural phrasing. 'Both' requires two items; use 'also' to add the second quality.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× My dreams, uh, for is for me really special meetings because umm, in my dreams I was happy and uh, I want, I wanna to uh, to my dreams come true.

My dreams are really special to me because in my dreams I am happy, and I want my dreams to come true.

Correct verb 'are' for plural 'dreams' (not 'for is for me'). Use present simple 'I am' to match general desire. Remove incorrect 'wanna to'—use 'want my dreams to come true'. Fix word order and remove fillers for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HappyCheerful; Glad; Fortunate
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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