Part 1
Giám khảo
How often do you watch movies?
Thí sinh
Basically I'm a very boring person. I wonder what's I don't watch the movies frequently but when I have chance to when I get chance to watch the movies I like to. Was the non fictional 1.
Giám khảo
What kinds of movies do you usually watch?
Thí sinh
Actually I'm not into the movies that much but when I do have the chance I prefer non fiction films such as documentaries or biopics because I enjoy learning about real events and people from which I can gather the information to more to motivate me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the cinema or watching at home?
Thí sinh
Well, actually it depends on the situation. When I am alone at home, I can watch movies through the videos through the source of Netflix at home. But when I have to go out to watch movies in cinema, I prepare my friends with give me a.
Giám khảo
Is it useful to watch movies in other languages?
Thí sinh
Yes, obviously I think it is essential to was a movies in different languages because it increases your vocabulary and it gives you idea about the multicultural and multi languages around the world which is probably the.
How often do you watch movies?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear frequency statement. Start with a topic sentence (e.g. "I don't watch movies very often") then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (avoid fragments) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: I don't watch movies very often; maybe once or twice a month. However, when I have free time I usually choose non-fiction films because I prefer learning about real people and events. This helps me relax while also gaining new knowledge.
What kinds of movies do you usually watch?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence naming the types of films, then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, for example, therefore) and avoid redundancy. Keep sentences grammatically correct and concise.
Ví dụ: I usually prefer non-fiction films, especially documentaries and biopics. Because I enjoy learning about real events and people's lives, these films give me useful information and inspiration. For example, a recent biopic about a scientist motivated me to study more about environmental issues.
Do you prefer the cinema or watching at home?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Answer directly (state your preference or say it depends) and support it with clear reasons and one concrete example. Fix grammar errors and avoid unfinished sentences. Use linking words like "however" or "when" to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: It depends, but I generally prefer watching films at home for comfort and convenience. For instance, when I'm alone I watch on Netflix because I can pause the film and choose subtitles. However, I go to the cinema with friends for big releases to enjoy the atmosphere and better sound.
Is it useful to watch movies in other languages?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Give a clear statement and then two specific benefits with brief examples. Correct verb forms and complete your thoughts; use linking words like "because" and "for example" to make the answer coherent and logical.
Ví dụ: Yes, I think watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve vocabulary and listening skills. For example, watching Spanish films with subtitles taught me new everyday expressions. It also exposes you to different cultures, which broadens your understanding of the world.
× Basically I'm a very boring person. I wonder what's I don't watch the movies frequently but when I have chance to when I get chance to watch the movies I like to. Was the non fictional 1.
✓ Basically, I'm a very boring person. I don't watch movies frequently, but when I get the chance to watch them, I prefer non-fiction ones.
This contains sentence structure problems and incorrect word forms. 'I wonder what's I don't watch the movies frequently' is ungrammatical and should be simplified to 'I don't watch movies frequently.' Use plural 'movies' without the definite article unless specific. 'when I have chance' needs the article 'the' and better phrasing 'when I get the chance.' Replace 'I like to. Was the non fictional 1.' with 'I prefer non-fiction ones' for clarity and correct adjective form 'non-fiction'.
× Actually I'm not into the movies that much but when I do have the chance I prefer non fiction films such as documentaries or biopics because I enjoy learning about real events and people from which I can gather the information to more to motivate me.
✓ Actually, I'm not into movies that much, but when I do have the chance I prefer non-fiction films such as documentaries or biopics because I enjoy learning about real events and people from which I can gather information to motivate me.
This sentence has article and word choice issues. Use 'movies' without 'the' because it's a general statement. 'non fiction' should be hyphenated 'non-fiction.' 'the information' is unnecessary; use 'information' for uncountable noun. Remove extraneous words 'to more to' and simplify to 'to motivate me.' Commas improve clarity.
× Well, actually it depends on the situation. When I am alone at home, I can watch movies through the videos through the source of Netflix at home. But when I have to go out to watch movies in cinema, I prepare my friends with give me a.
✓ Well, actually it depends on the situation. When I am alone at home, I can watch movies on Netflix. But when I go out to watch movies at the cinema, I go with my friends.
The original has awkward phrasing and redundancy: 'watch movies through the videos through the source of Netflix at home' should be simplified to 'watch movies on Netflix.' 'watch movies in cinema' should be 'at the cinema.' 'I prepare my friends with give me a' is ungrammatical; likely meaning 'I go with my friends.' Use concise, standard collocations: 'on Netflix', 'at the cinema', 'go with my friends.'
× Yes, obviously I think it is essential to was a movies in different languages because it increases your vocabulary and it gives you idea about the multicultural and multi languages around the world which is probably the.
✓ Yes, obviously I think it is essential to watch movies in different languages because it increases your vocabulary and gives you an idea about the multicultural and multilingual world.
Errors include wrong verb form 'was' instead of 'watch' and incorrect article and noun forms. Use the infinitive 'to watch.' 'a movies' is wrong—use plural 'movies' without 'a.' 'gives you idea' needs an article: 'gives you an idea.' 'multi languages' should be 'multilingual' or 'multiple languages'; 'multicultural and multilingual world' is concise. Remove trailing fragment 'which is probably the.'