Sharing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、簡潔で自然な表現に変えると良いです。例えば過去形や受動態/使役表現の誤用（"thought me" → "taught me"）、冗長な表現（"how to how important"）を修正してください。また具体例は良いので、接続詞を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, they did. My parents taught me that sharing is important, so they often encouraged me to share my toys with friends when I was young.

Gợi ý: 時制、一致、数の扱い（"we share"→"we shared"/"we share" depending on tense、"different type"→"different types"）を直しましょう。語彙は適切ですが、より自然な表現にして接続語で理由を明確にすると良いです。具体的な例や状況（何のスイーツか、どのように分けるか）を加えると会話が豊かになります。

Ví dụ: I usually like to share food, especially desserts. For example, when I go to a café with a friend, we often order several types of sweets and share them so we can try different flavours.

Gợi ý: あいまいな回答を避け、はっきりしたトピック文を最初に置いてください（"I think personal items/tasks..."）。理由を明確にし、具体例を増やすと良いです。また"homework"についての説明を自然に言い換え、冗長な部分を省いてください。

Ví dụ: I think personal tasks and private items aren't suitable for sharing. For instance, homework should be done individually because sharing it could prevent you from learning and getting a true grade.

Gợi ý: 時制と語順を整えて簡潔に述べ、不要な繰り返し（"it's it"）を避けましょう。感情の表現は良いので、理由をリンクワードでつなげて詳しく説明すると自然になります（"so"、"which made me"など）。

Ví dụ: Yes. Recently I shared a chocolate ice cream with my daughter at a café, and we took turns trying each other's spoons, which made me very happy.

Gợi ý: 意味が伝わりにくい箇所（"hear the good news with my husband the first week"）を明確にし、主題文を直接にしてください。不要な語（"it's good to listen now every time"）を整理し、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。

Ví dụ: The first person I would share good news with is my husband, because he is always supportive and we usually talk every night before bed.

Gợi ý: 自信を持って詰まらずに話す練習をし、不要な話し言葉（"umm", "uh"）を減らしましょう。動詞の形と語順（"it makes us laughing"→"it makes us laugh"、"sometimes shared"→"I sometimes share"）を直し、具体的な例をより詳しく述べてください。

Ví dụ: I usually share interesting or funny stories and videos with my friends because they make us laugh. For example, I sometimes send short comedy clips that I find online.

× Yes they did. They thought me how to how important it is to share something.

✓ Yes, they did. They taught me how important it is to share things.

'Thought' is the past tense of 'think' and is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'teach' (past tense 'taught') to indicate instruction. 'How to how important' is redundant and ungrammatical; remove the extra 'how'. Use the plural 'things' after 'share' for general items. Suggestion: use 'taught me how important it is to share things.'

× For example, they encourage me to share toys with my friend when I was young.

✓ For example, they encouraged me to share toys with my friends when I was young.

The sentence refers to past action, so the verb should be in past tense 'encouraged' (Grammar Problem Type 5: Past tense issue). Also 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general practice and sound natural (Grammar Problem Type 1: Singular and plural issue). Suggestion: use past tense for past events and plural where general.

× I prefer to share some food.

✓ I prefer to share food.

'Some food' is not ungrammatical, but 'share food' is more natural when speaking generally. The verb 'prefer' is present and appropriate (Grammar Problem Type 6: Present tense issue is minimal here). Suggestion: simplify to 'I prefer to share food.'

× For example, when I went to coffee with my friend, we share some sweets together because we can enjoy different type of sweets.

✓ For example, when I went for coffee with my friend, we shared some sweets together because we could enjoy different types of sweets.

Sequence of past actions requires past tense: 'went' and 'shared' (Grammar Problem Type 5). 'Went to coffee' is unnatural; use 'went for coffee'. 'Can' should be past 'could'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types' (Grammar Problem Type 1). Suggestion: keep consistent past tense and correct noun plurality.

× I'm not sure, but I personally think some tasks should be done by myself, for example homework.

✓ I'm not sure, but I personally think some tasks should be done by me, for example homework.

Use 'done by me' instead of 'done by myself' because 'myself' is a reflexive pronoun used for emphasis or when subject and object are same; here passive with 'me' is correct (Grammar Problem Type 15: Incorrect reflexive pronoun use). Suggestion: use 'me' in passive constructions unless you mean emphasis.

× This is because if we don't do homework, it's not good.

✓ This is because if we don't do our homework, it's not good for us.

Add possessive 'our' to specify whose homework is meant (Grammar Problem Type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions/possessives and 22: Article errors). Also add 'for us' to clarify why it's not good. Suggestion: include correct possessive and clarify the consequence.

× Yes, I do. When I went to coffee with my daughter, she wanted chocolate ice cream.

✓ Yes, I did. When I went for coffee with my daughter, she wanted chocolate ice cream.

Answering 'Do you have anything to share recently?' should use past reference; 'Yes, I did' matches the past example. 'Went to coffee' -> 'went for coffee' is natural (Grammar Problem Type 5). Suggestion: keep verb tense consistent and use natural expressions.

× So we share the chocolate ice cream.

✓ So we shared the chocolate ice cream.

Maintain past tense 'shared' to match surrounding narrative (Grammar Problem Type 5). If referring to one ice cream, 'the chocolate ice cream' is acceptable; keep as is. Suggestion: use past tense for past events.

× It was very good opportunity for me because it's it makes me very happy.

✓ It was a very good opportunity for me because it made me very happy.

Missing article 'a' before 'very good opportunity' (Grammar Problem Type 22: Article errors). 'It's it makes' is a duplication; use past tense 'made' to match 'was' (Grammar Problem Type 5). Suggestion: remove duplication, add article, and align verb tense.

× I want to hear the good news with my husband the first week.

✓ I want to hear the good news from my husband first.

Use 'from' to indicate the person who gives the news (Grammar Problem Type 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 'The first week' is unclear; 'first' at the end is natural. Also 'hear...with' is wrong here. Suggestion: say 'hear the good news from my husband first.'

× This is because he it's good to listen now every time, so we often chat before going to bed.

✓ This is because he is good at listening to me, and we often chat before going to bed.

'He it's' is ungrammatical; replace with 'he is'. 'Good to listen now every time' unclear—use 'good at listening to me' to convey meaning (Grammar Problem Type 12: Incorrect use of pronouns and 6: Present tense issue). Suggestion: make subject-verb clear and use correct expression 'good at listening.'

× I prefer sharing, umm, interesting or funny news.

✓ I prefer sharing interesting or funny news.

Remove filler 'umm' in formal answer. The sentence is otherwise grammatical; 'prefer sharing' is fine in present tense (Grammar Problem Type 6). Suggestion: keep it concise: 'I prefer sharing interesting or funny news.'

× This is because it makes us laughing.

✓ This is because it makes us laugh.

Use base verb 'laugh' after 'makes' (causative construction) rather than '-ing' form (Grammar Problem Type 8: Verb + -ing form). 'Makes us laughing' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'makes us laugh.'

× Uh, for example, uh, sometimes shared, uh, funny video with my friend.

✓ For example, sometimes I shared a funny video with my friend.

Add subject 'I' for a complete sentence (Grammar Problem Type 23: Sentence without a verb/subject). 'Shared' is past tense—keep consistent; add article 'a' before 'funny video' (Grammar Problem Type 22). Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: say 'For example, sometimes I shared a funny video with my friend.'