Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid incorrect word choice ("entitled" is wrong here), and give 1–2 brief supporting details using linking words. Use correct grammar (past simple) and natural collocations like "have a bike" or "own a bike."

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. Instead, I usually walked to school or took the bus, so I never learned to ride at an early age.

Gợi ý: Be more confident and precise. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Somewhat), then expand with specific reasons and linking words (for example, because, therefore, as a result). Avoid informal phrases like "gonna" and awkward pronoun use ("they are in childhood"). Use appropriate vocabulary such as "children" and "learn to ride."

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many children learn to ride them at an early age. For example, schools and parents often encourage cycling as a cheap and healthy way to travel, so you see many youngsters cycling to parks and shops.

× I didn't have any bike when I was entitled.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'entitled' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'childhood' or 'a child'. This is a sentence structure/word choice error, not in the provided list exactly, but it fits under sentence structure errors (ID 26). Replace 'entitled' with 'a child' and use the singular 'a bike' because 'any bike' is unnatural in this affirmative past-tense context. Suggestion: use 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

× Normally when they are in childhood they're gonna learn about how to ride a bike.

✓ Normally, when children are young, they learn how to ride a bike.

Multiple issues: 'in childhood' is an awkward prepositional phrase; use 'when children are young' or 'in childhood' rephrased. 'They're gonna' is colloquial and ungrammatical in formal speech; use 'they learn' or 'they are going to learn' depending on meaning. 'Learn about how to ride' is incorrect—use 'learn how to ride' or 'learn to ride'. This fits 'sentence structure errors' (ID 26) and 'incorrect use of words'—apply clear standard phrasing: 'Normally, when children are young, they learn how to ride a bike.'