Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct small mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct the word error (“bike” not “back”), avoid redundancy, and add one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I always wanted one because most of my classmates owned bikes and I felt left out. For example, they would ride to the park after school while I had to walk, which made me quite jealous.

Gợi ý: Use present-tense consistently and refine phrasing. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like “most of the people” and replace with precise references (commuters, students, elderly).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Firstly, because they are an affordable and convenient way for commuters to travel short distances; for instance, many office workers use e-bikes to avoid traffic. Secondly, they are used for exercise and leisure, so students and older people also ride regularly.

× I didn't. However, I had always wanted to have my own back, back to my childhood, because I noticed my peers, they all had their own bike.

✓ I didn't. However, I had always wanted to have my own bike back in my childhood because I noticed my peers all had their own bikes.

The sentence mixes tenses and contains word choice and word order errors. 'Had always wanted' (past perfect) is acceptable if contrasting with another past event, but 'have my own back' is incorrect word choice; it should be 'have my own bike'. 'Back to my childhood' is unnatural; use 'back in my childhood'. Also 'peers, they all had' is redundant; remove the extra pronoun. Finally 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when referring to peers collectively. Suggestion: use clear past tense phrasing and correct noun choices: 'I had always wanted my own bike back in my childhood because I noticed my peers all had their own bikes.'

× Yeah, it was super popular in my country.

✓ Yeah, they are very popular in my country.

The question asks about general popularity (present tense). Using past tense 'was' conflicts with the general present-state meaning. Also 'it' is vague; refer to 'bikes' (plural), and use 'are' with plural subject. 'Super' is informal; 'very' is a neutral alternative. Suggestion: use present simple to describe general facts: 'Bikes are very popular in my country.'

× Since China has a big population, bicycles are pretty sought after among people from all ages.

✓ Since China has a large population, bicycles are quite sought after among people of all ages.

'Big population' is non-idiomatic; use 'large population'. 'Pretty' as a modifier is informal and ambiguous; 'quite' is clearer. 'People from all ages' is incorrect prepositional phrase; use 'people of all ages.' Suggestion: pick idiomatic quantifiers and correct prepositional phrases: 'a large population' and 'people of all ages.'

× No matter people go to work or go to study or just want to exercise, bikes can always be a good choice for most of the people.

✓ Whether people go to work, study, or just want to exercise, bikes are often a good choice for most people.

The connector 'No matter' is incomplete; the correct correlative is 'Whether... or'. Also streamline verb forms: use parallel infinitives or verbs ('go to work, study, or want to exercise'). 'Can always be' is too strong; 'are often' is more natural. 'Most of the people' is redundant; use 'most people.' Suggestion: use correct correlative conjunction 'whether' and make verbs parallel: 'Whether people go to work, study, or want to exercise, bikes are often a good choice for most people.'