Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Focus on clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (e.g. “Yes, I did.”), then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct past-tense forms and simple linking words (for example, “but”, “so”, “because”). Avoid unnecessary hesitations and fix pronoun/word choice errors (e.g. “I was seven”, “my dad bought me a bike”, “I didn’t really like it”, “I used it to learn to ride”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I was seven when my dad bought me a small bike, but I didn’t really like it because it was too tiny for me. I preferred a bigger one, yet I used the small bike to learn how to ride, and that helped me gain confidence quickly.

Gợi ý: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence and two supporting reasons, using linking words for coherence. Correct small grammar issues and avoid fillers (“you know”). Use specific details or examples (e.g. shared bike companies, typical distances people cycle, or problems like traffic congestion). Keep it concise (no more than five sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. First, heavy traffic and crowded public transport encourage many people to cycle for short commutes. Second, bike-sharing services have become common and affordable, making cycling a convenient choice for students and office workers.

× Why was 7?

✓ I was 7.

The speaker used 'Why' incorrectly; they intended to state their age. Use 'I was 7' to indicate age in the past. Suggestion: say 'I was 7 years old' for clarity.

× My dad owed me a bike.

✓ My dad bought me a bike.

'Owed' means to be indebted, which is incorrect here. The intended meaning is that the father purchased or gave a bike. Use 'bought' for past purchase or 'gave' if it was a gift. Suggestion: use 'My dad bought me a bike' or 'My dad gave me a bike.'

× But actually I'm not really like it.

✓ But actually I didn't really like it.

The original mixes present form and 'like' meaning past preference. For past feelings use past tense 'didn't like.' Also 'like it' should refer to the bike using 'it' is acceptable but tense must match. Suggestion: use 'I didn't really like it' or 'I didn't like it very much.'

× It's really small.

✓ It was really small.

The context is past (childhood), so 'was' is correct instead of 'is.' Maintain past tense for consistency. Suggestion: 'It was really small.'

× Well, I prefer the bigger one, but you know, unfortunately I'm so sure to get the bigger 1 and I use that small well buy to learn how to write it.

✓ Well, I preferred the bigger one, but you know, unfortunately I wasn't able to get the bigger one, so I used that small one to learn how to ride it.

Multiple issues: tense consistency (past preference 'preferred'), incorrect phrase 'I'm so sure to get' (meaning inability: use 'wasn't able to get'), numeral '1' should be 'one', 'use' should be past 'used', 'well buy' is incorrect and likely 'so I used' or 'so I used that small one', and 'write' should be 'ride'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout and use clear verbs: 'I preferred the bigger one, but unfortunately I wasn't able to get it, so I used the small one to learn how to ride.'

× I I think so, Especially now, you know, a lot of traffic jam in public transportation always have a lot of people.

✓ I think so. Especially now, you know, there are a lot of traffic jams and public transportation is always crowded.

Problems: repeated 'I', sentence fragments, missing 'there are' for existence, incorrect singular 'traffic jam' should be plural 'traffic jams', and 'have a lot of people' is awkward; use 'is crowded' or 'has a lot of people.' Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence and adjust nouns and verbs: 'there are a lot of traffic jams and public transportation is always crowded.'

× So there are also some people want to drive to school or they work or just to travel.

✓ So some people want to ride bikes to school, to work, or just to travel.

Missing 'who' or infinitive structure: 'people want to drive' is okay but in context bikes are being discussed; 'drive' is confusing. Also grammar: 'there are also some people want' needs 'who' ('people who want') or restructure. Suggestion: 'So some people want to ride bikes to school, to work, or just to travel.' Or 'There are also some people who want to ride to school or work.'

× And especially now it's more convenient for people to use the share bike.

✓ And especially now it's more convenient for people to use shared bikes.

'Share bike' is nonstandard; use 'shared bikes' or 'bike-sharing services.' Also maintain 'it's' contraction is fine. Suggestion: say 'use shared bikes' or 'use bike-sharing services.'

× It's really cheap and convenient.

✓ They are really cheap and convenient.

Referring to 'shared bikes' (plural), so pronoun should be plural 'they are' rather than 'it is.' If referring to the service singularly, 'It is' could be used with 'the service is cheap,' but because previous noun is plural, use 'they are.' Suggestion: ensure pronoun agrees with noun number: 'They are really cheap and convenient.'