Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid contradictions and fillers, and give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences. For example, explain why you didn’t have a bike, what you did instead, and a brief positive or negative comment. Reduce pauses and repetitions to improve fluency.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. Instead, I usually walked to school, which gave me time to chat and share stories with my siblings. Overall, I didn’t mind walking because it became a pleasant part of our morning routine.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use clearer, more accurate vocabulary and linking words. Start with a topic sentence that states your opinion, then add 1–2 specific examples or reasons, using correct nouns and verbs and avoiding hesitations. Mention where bikes are common and why (cost, convenience, culture) to make your answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many students cycle to school because it is cheap and convenient, and in rural areas you can often see families using bicycles for short trips and exercise.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was tired because my parents couldn't afford one.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn't afford one.

The student used 'when I was tired' which is semantically incorrect for referring to childhood; the question asks about childhood. Use 'when I was a child' to match the past time frame. This is a vocabulary/meaning error tied to tense context; keep past tense 'didn't have' and correct the time expression.

× I usually walked to school.

✓ I usually walked to school.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable in past habitual context 'usually walked' to describe repeated past action. No change needed. Included for completeness.

× It isn't a problem.

✓ It wasn't a problem.

The student switched to present tense 'isn't' while describing a past situation. Maintain past tense 'wasn't' to keep tense consistency with the previous sentences about childhood.

× Uh, it wasn't a problem because my, uh, because, uh, it's, it's gave us time to treat and share stories.

✓ It wasn't a problem because it gave us time to talk and share stories.

Several issues: redundancy 'because my, uh, because', incorrect verb form 'it's gave' (mix of present 'is' and past 'gave'), and awkward noun 'treat'. Correct structure uses past tense 'gave' and a suitable verb 'talk'. Remove filler words and redundant 'because' to make a clear sentence.

× Yes, it is popular in my country, many students going to school by bike and uh, in the country Rd. you can see many uh, hand out uh, ride the bike to excise.

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country. Many students go to school by bike, and in the countryside you can see many people riding bikes for exercise.

Multiple errors: 'it is popular' should be 'they are popular' because 'bikes' is plural (subject-verb agreement/third person plural). 'many students going' lacks a finite verb; use 'many students go'. 'country Rd.' is unclear; likely 'countryside'. 'hand out' is incorrect word choice; use 'people'. 'ride the bike to excise' has wrong infinitive/form and spelling: use 'riding bikes for exercise'. Ensure subject-verb agreement, correct verb forms, and clearer vocabulary.