Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a back when I was a child. My father bought it for my birthday and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon until it become too small for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think yes, shared bikes are now widely used in my city because they are cheap and very convenient for short trips, so many people prefer them to buses or taxis. Also, cycling is considered environmentally friendly, which makes it popular among young people.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 用词和语法需要更准确,并注意发音和拼写错误(如“back”应为“bike”;“become”应为“became”)。答题结构可以更清晰:先直接回答,然后简短补充具体细节(什么时候、多久、和谁、感觉如何)。可以用简单的连接词(e.g. because, so, then)使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for my eighth birthday, and I rode it around the neighborhood every afternoon after school for about two years. Because it was a small, bright-red bike, I outgrew it quickly, so we sold it when I was ten.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清楚且相关,但可以更自然精炼并加入具体例子或数据以增加说服力。注意句子连接的多样性,避免重复(e.g. "popular"多次出现)。可以用对比或个人观察来丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my city, especially shared bikes, because they are cheap and convenient for short journeys. For example, many commuters use them to travel the last mile from metro stations to work, and young people often choose cycling because it’s seen as a healthier and more eco-friendly option.
× Yes, I had a back when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
句子中把“bike”误写为“back”,这是单词拼写错误导致的名词不正确用法。根据上下文提到骑车,应使用单数可数名词“bike”。建议仔细检查拼写并根据语境选用正确名词。
× ...until it become too small for me.
✓ ...until it became too small for me.
此处为过去时背景(过去常常骑直到变小),动词应使用过去式“became”而不是现在式“become”。根据时态一致性规则,描述过去发生的动作或状态变化要用过去式。建议在叙述过去事件时统一使用过去时(如“had”,“used to ride”,“became”)。
× I think yes, shared bikes are now widely used in my city because they are cheap and very convenient for short trips, so many people prefer them to buses or taxis.
✓ I think so. Shared bikes are now widely used in my city because they are cheap and very convenient for short trips, so many people prefer them to buses or taxis.
原句开头“I think yes”结构不自然,常用表达为“I think so”或直接“I think”。这是句子结构/搭配问题。建议使用固定搭配“I think so”或重构为两个句子以保证连贯性。
× Also, cycling is considered environmentally friendly, which makes it popular among young people.
✓ Also, cycling is considered environmentally friendly, which makes it popular among young people.
此句语法正确,时态与语境一致(一般事实/现在时),无需修改。提示:保持现在时表述普遍观点或事实。