Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't buy one. I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think the bike is popular in my country because in my country the card is very expensive, so that's why the bike is everyone has and the bite is everyone go.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: Be direct and relevant: answer the question clearly, use a simple past statement, and add one short supporting detail if useful. Avoid irrelevant phrases. Also correct word choice: say “I didn’t have one” (not “I didn’t buy one”) if you mean you didn’t own a bike as a child. Keep to 1–2 sentences and use linking if adding detail.
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I usually walked to school because my family couldn’t afford one.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason using correct vocabulary and linking words (for example, “because” or “so”). Use correct nouns (car, bike) and plural forms when needed. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a concrete example or brief consequence.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because cars are expensive, so many people choose bicycles for short trips. For example, commuters often ride bikes to work to save money and avoid traffic.
× No, I didn't buy one. I was a child.
✓ No, I didn't have one when I was a child.
The student used 'I didn't buy one' which changes meaning and is inappropriate for answering 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?'. The correct response uses past simple of 'have' to describe possession in the past: 'I didn't have one when I was a child.' Suggestion: use verbs that match the question (have for possession).
× Yes, I think the bike is popular in my country because in my country the card is very expensive, so that's why the bike is everyone has and the bite is everyone go.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because cars are very expensive, so many people have bikes and use them to get around.
This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect pronouns and determiners ('the bike' vs 'bikes'), wrong words ('card' should be 'cars', 'bite' is incorrect), and ungrammatical phrases ('the bike is everyone has and the bite is everyone go'). Corrections: pluralize 'bike' to match general statement ('bikes are popular'), use 'cars' not 'card', use plural verb agreement for 'cars are', replace 'that's why' with clear result clause, use 'many people have bikes' for possession, and 'use them to get around' for purpose. Suggestion: simplify sentences, choose correct words, and keep subject-verb agreement and correct pronouns (many people / them).