Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (past tense, articles) and avoid repetition. Mention a brief reason and an example to make the answer specific.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have my own bike as a child. My father had one and he tried to teach me, but I only rode it for a few minutes because I was too scared to balance. For example, I remember falling once and that put me off learning properly.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with clear, specific reasons. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) and avoid filler sounds. Finish your sentence and include one concrete detail (e.g., cost, traffic, fuel efficiency).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are much cheaper than cars and easier to park. For example, many people who commute short distances prefer motorbikes due to heavy traffic and high fuel costs, so most households own at least one bike.

× I didn't have my own bike when I was a child.

✓ I didn't have my own bike when I was a child.

No change needed. The sentence is grammatically correct: past simple negative with subject 'I' and auxiliary 'didn't' is appropriate.

× My father had a bike and tried and I tried to learn it and I tried to ride it just for few minutes and, and I, I never like, I never learned it properly because at that time I was very scary to learn the to learn to write.

✓ My father had a bike and he tried to teach me; I tried to learn to ride it for just a few minutes, but I never learned properly because at that time I was too scared to learn to ride.

This sentence contains multiple structure and word-choice problems. Issues fixed: run-on sentence and unclear subjects by splitting and adding a semicolon; 'tried to teach me' clarifies 'tried'; 'learn it' changed to 'learn to ride it' for correct verb pattern (verb + to-infinitive); 'just for few minutes' corrected to 'for just a few minutes' (article and adverb placement); 'I never like' is incorrect tense/word choice, changed to 'I never learned properly'; 'very scary to learn the to learn to write' is incorrect — 'scared' is the correct adjective, and 'ride' replaces 'write'; 'too scared to learn to ride' uses correct infinitive phrase. Suggestion: simplify long clauses, keep clear subjects, use correct collocations (scared to do something), and maintain parallel verb forms.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

No change needed. The sentence is correct: plural 'bikes' and present simple 'are' suit a general question about popularity.

× Uh, definitely bikes are the popular in my country because in my country, uh, like uh, most of the people have a bike, then a car because car is expensive and uh, lots of people can't uh, buy a car.

✓ Definitely, bikes are popular in my country because most people have a bike rather than a car, since cars are expensive and many people cannot afford to buy one.

Problems corrected: remove unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'popular' and after restructuring place adjective properly; 'most of the people' simplified to 'most people'; 'then a car' changed to 'rather than a car' for correct comparison; 'car is expensive' changed to 'cars are expensive' to match plural generalization; 'lots of people can't buy a car' changed to 'many people cannot afford to buy one' for natural collocation and formality. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and correct articles ('a' vs 'the'), and use 'afford' with 'cannot' for financial inability.

× That's why they afford the bike.

✓ That's why they choose to use bikes.

'They afford the bike' is ungrammatical: 'afford' is a transitive verb that needs an object meaning 'can pay for', but native phrasing is 'cannot afford a car' or 'they can afford the bike.' The intended meaning is that bikes are affordable, so rephrase to 'they choose to use bikes' or 'bikes are affordable for them.' Suggestion: use 'afford' with correct objects (afford a car) or use verbs like 'choose' or adjectives like 'more affordable'.

× And lo, most of the people have a bike in my country because it is the.

✓ Also, most people in my country have a bike because it is affordable and convenient.

This fragment is incomplete and unclear ('lo' and 'it is the' are incorrect). Fixes: 'lo' changed to 'also' for natural discourse marker; removed 'most of the people' to 'most people' (more natural); completed the thought by adding plausible reasons 'affordable and convenient.' Suggestion: avoid filler words, complete thoughts, and state clear reasons.