Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., "red color bicycle", "I used to ride by ride"). Use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I remember riding it around the neighborhood every evening because it helped me exercise and meet my friends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide clear, specific reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, because, so, also) and correct noun forms (bikes, ride bicycles). Avoid vague filler like "which is OK."

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use bicycles for commuting because they are cheap and convenient, and others ride them for exercise and leisure. For example, in cities you often see dedicated bike lanes and morning groups of cyclists.

× I used to, but I used to ride by ride bicycle and I like I also Li like like.

✓ I used to ride my bicycle a lot, and I liked it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and contains repeated fragments and incorrect verb forms. 'Used to' already conveys a habitual past action, so it should be followed by the base verb 'ride'. 'By ride bicycle' is incorrect word order and vocabulary; it should be 'my bicycle'. The present tense 'I like' conflicts with the past habitual 'used to', so change to past 'liked' to maintain tense consistency. Remove repetitions. Suggestion: state past habit as 'I used to ride my bicycle a lot, and I liked it.' Note: This correction addresses incorrect present participle structure and mixed tenses.

× It was a red color bicycle.

✓ It was a red bicycle.

'Red color bicycle' is redundant and ungrammatical in English. The adjective 'red' directly modifies 'bicycle', so use 'a red bicycle.' If emphasizing color, say 'a bicycle that was red' or 'a bicycle of red color', but the natural phrasing is 'a red bicycle.'

× I think bike is more popular in my country.

✓ I think bikes are more popular in my country.

The subject 'bike' is countable and here refers to bikes in general, so use the plural 'bikes' and match the verb with plural: 'are.' The original uses singular noun with plural sense, causing subject-verb disagreement. Use 'bikes are' for general statements.

× There are many people are bred bicycle for work and for exercise.

✓ Many people ride bicycles for work and exercise.

The original sentence has several errors: 'There are many people are' is redundant and ungrammatical; use either 'There are many people who' or simply 'Many people'. 'Bred bicycle' is incorrect vocabulary and likely a mistaken verb; the correct verb is 'ride', and 'bicycle' should be plural 'bicycles' or use the singular collective 'bicycles' after 'ride'. Also 'for work and for exercise' is repetitive; 'for work and exercise' is more natural. Suggestion: 'Many people ride bicycles for work and exercise.'

× They also love to ride bicycle and which is OK.

✓ They also love to ride bicycles, which is fine.

The clause 'and which is OK' is ungrammatical: 'which' cannot follow 'and' like that. Use a relative clause 'which is fine/OK' to comment on the preceding clause. Also use plural 'bicycles' after 'ride'. 'Fine' is a more natural adjective than 'OK' in this context, but 'OK' is acceptable. Suggestion: 'They also love to ride bicycles, which is fine.'