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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child. I afraid to buy a ride a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially the area where the people have a difficulty in accessing the buses and also in the area where the people feel like comfortable and the area also playing.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: Be grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tense and linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix errors (e.g., 'I was afraid to ride a bike' not 'I afraid to buy a ride a bike').

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was afraid to ride because I found balancing difficult, and my parents preferred I use public transport for safety reasons.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, then add two clear, specific supporting points with linking words. Use logical connectors (e.g., 'especially', 'also', 'because') and correct phrasing (e.g., 'areas where people have difficulty accessing buses' and 'recreational areas'). Avoid vague phrases like 'the area also playing.'

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in rural areas where people have difficulty accessing buses. They are also common in parks and recreational areas because cycling is cheap, healthy, and convenient for short trips.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× No, I didn't have any bike when I was a child.

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The speaker used 'any bike' incorrectly. Countable singular nouns require an article (a/an) when singular and unspecified. Use 'a bike' with the past-tense negative 'didn't have' to refer to a single countable item. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns (e.g., 'I didn't have a bike').

Sentence structure errors

× I afraid to buy a ride a bike.

I was afraid to learn to ride a bike.

The original sentence lacks the required verb 'was' after the subject and uses an incorrect verb sequence 'buy a ride a bike.' Correct structure: subject + past-be ('was') + adjective ('afraid') + infinitive to express fear about an action. Also 'learn to ride' is the proper phrase for acquiring bicycle-riding skill. Suggestion: include the correct past tense of 'to be' and use 'learn to ride a bike.'

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially the area where the people have a difficulty in accessing the buses and also in the area where the people feel like comfortable and the area also playing.

Yes, bikes are very popular in my country, especially in areas where people have difficulty accessing buses, in places where people feel comfortable riding them, and in recreational areas.

The original sentence has multiple structural problems: incorrect article use ('the area' instead of 'areas'), unnecessary 'the people' and awkward phrasing ('have a difficulty in accessing the buses') and redundant or unclear clauses. Corrections: use plural 'areas' when speaking generally; use 'have difficulty accessing buses' (no article before 'difficulty' and no 'the' before 'buses' when speaking generally); simplify 'feel like comfortable' to 'feel comfortable riding them'; replace 'the area also playing' with 'recreational areas' for clarity. Suggestion: break complex ideas into parallel, concise phrases and use correct noun forms and prepositions.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AfraidFrightened; Reluctant
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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