Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has multiple grammar errors, awkward phrasing and is too long and repetitive. To improve: (1) Use correct past tense and simpler sentence structure: begin with a clear topic sentence. (2) Avoid repetition by choosing one or two specific supporting details (e.g., how often you rode it, why you loved it). (3) Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'and') correctly to connect ideas. (4) Keep the response within 2–4 concise sentences. Specific points: change 'I have a bike' to 'I had a bike', replace 'every time when I would my friends' with 'whenever I played with my friends', and correct 'it's color is' to 'its colour was'.

Ví dụ: I had a small pink bike when I was a child, and I rode it almost every day. I loved it because it was fun to ride with my friends in the neighborhood, and it was still kept at my parents' house. Although it wasn't expensive, it has many happy memories for me.

Gợi ý: Your idea is clear but the answer contains hesitations, repetition and awkward phrasing. To improve: (1) Start with a direct topic sentence stating your view. (2) Give one or two specific reasons and a short example or contrast. (3) Reduce filler words like 'umm' and avoid repeating the same words. (4) Use linking words such as 'because', 'however', or 'for example' to make your reasoning coherent. (5) End with a brief prediction or contrast if relevant. Keep it to 2–4 sentences. Example corrections: say 'I don't think biking is very popular in Turkey because…'

Ví dụ: I don't think cycling is very popular in Turkey because many people prefer using convenient public transport. For example, in big cities there are reliable buses and metros, so most commuters choose those rather than riding a bike. However, cycling is becoming more common among young people for exercise and leisure.

× 'Yes, when I was a child I have a bike and I rode this bike every time when I would my friends and this bike was not so expensive but I loved it and still is here in my house and it's color is pink and I love it still because.'

✓ 'Yes, when I was a child I had a bike, and I rode it every time I went out with my friends. The bike was not very expensive, but I loved it. It is still here in my house, and its color is pink, so I still love it.'

'have' is incorrect because the sentence describes a past state; the past tense 'had' should be used to match 'when I was a child'. Also 'would my friends' is ungrammatical and should be 'went out with my friends' to express past repeated action. 'Still is here' has incorrect word order for present tense; use 'is still here'. 'it's color' is a possessive error: 'its' (possessive pronoun) is required rather than 'it's' (contraction of 'it is'). Suggestions: use past tense verbs for past time frames, use correct verb phrases for repeated past actions ('went out with'), place 'still' after the verb in 'is still here', and use 'its' for possession.'

× 'I'm Turkey, so I'm from Turkey and I don't think this is a common thing in my country cause umm, some people don't like umm, riding bike.'

✓ 'I'm from Turkey, and I don't think biking is common in my country because some people don't like riding bikes.'

'I'm Turkey' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'from' to indicate origin: 'I'm from Turkey'. 'this is a common thing' is awkward; 'biking is common' is more natural. 'cause' is informal; use 'because' in standard speech. 'riding bike' needs an article or plural: 'riding bikes' or 'riding a bike'. Suggestions: use 'from' for origin, choose natural noun phrases ('biking'), use 'because' for clarity, and pluralize countable nouns when talking generally.'

× 'In my country, Turkish people don't like riding bike 'cause we have good transportation, public transportation, so we don't have to use a bike for.'

✓ 'In my country, Turkish people don't like riding bikes because we have good public transportation, so we don't have to use bikes.'

'riding bike' and 'use a bike for' are incorrect quantifier/article uses. When speaking generally, countable nouns need plural or an article: use 'riding bikes' or 'a bike'. 'public transportation' is fine but 'good transportation, public transportation' is redundant; combine as 'good public transportation'. The ending 'use a bike for' is incomplete and should be 'use bikes.' Suggestions: use plurals for general statements about countable nouns, avoid redundancy, and complete the sentence with the correct noun form.'}]} PMID:27}