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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it gives a classical and cool look and it helps in transportation very quickly and it saves time too much as compared to a car.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Your response repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. For Part 1 you should give a direct, concise answer (1–2 sentences) with a brief supporting detail. Keep it natural and avoid repeating the question. For example, start with “Yes, I did” or “No, I didn’t,” then add one specific detail using a linking word (e.g. “because” or “so”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about six because my parents wanted me to learn balance and spend more time outdoors.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is slightly awkward and repetitive. Aim for natural phrasing, limit to 2–3 sentences, and use linking words to organise points (for example: “Firstly…”, “Also…”). Be specific about why bikes are popular (e.g. traffic, cost, environment) and avoid vague phrases like “too much.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular. Firstly, they are more convenient than cars in heavy traffic, so people can travel faster, and secondly they are cheaper to buy and maintain, which makes them a practical choice for many.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of articles / Sentence structure

× Did you have a bike when you were child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Type IDs 22 and 26 apply because the sentence omits the definite/indefinite article before the noun 'child' and has a minor sentence structure error. In English we use the article 'a' before singular countable nouns when speaking about one nonspecific example. The correct phrase is 'a child.' Suggestion: include the article 'a' in similar sentences (e.g., 'when I was a child', 'when she was a child').

Subject-verb agreement / Incorrect use of pronouns / Verb form

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because it gives a classical and cool look and it helps in transportation very quickly and it saves time too much as compared to a car.

Yes, bikes are popular in my country because they give a classic, cool look, they help with quicker transportation, and they save a lot of time compared to a car.

Multiple errors correspond to IDs 27 (subject-verb agreement), 12 (pronoun use), 13 (adjective/adverb use), 20 (adverb placement) and 14 (quantifier). Problems: the subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to them must be 'they' and the verbs should be plural ('give', 'help', 'save') not 'gives/helps/saves.' 'Classical' is not the best adjective for appearance; 'classic' is more appropriate. 'Very quickly' is an adverb phrase placed awkwardly; 'quicker' or 'more quickly' fits better when comparing speed. 'Too much' is informal and awkward here; use 'a lot of' or 'much' depending on formality. 'As compared to a car' is wordy—use 'compared to a car.' Suggestions: match pronouns and verbs in number, choose correct adjectives (classic), place adverbs close to the verb ('help with quicker transportation' or 'help people travel more quickly'), and use natural quantifiers ('a lot of time' or 'much time').

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CoolChilly; Unenthusiastic; Calm; Bold; Fashionable
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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