Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep your answer in past tense and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid contradictions (e.g. "don't have" vs "had") and correct unclear words ("to charge" is likely incorrect).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child, but I did have a bicycle. I usually rode it to school and I often used it to go play with friends, so I rode it almost every day.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then support it with two concise, specific reasons linked logically. Use better vocabulary (e.g. "convenient", "space-saving") and correct awkward phrasing. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and include an example or consequence.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are convenient and save parking space. For example, commuters often choose bicycles in crowded cities since they are easier to park and cheaper than cars.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle which I used to ride to my school to charge and when I went to play with my friends I used that bicycle always.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle that I used to ride to school, and I always used that bicycle when I went to play with my friends.

Multiple errors: wrong tense use ('don't have' with 'when I was a child' should be past simple: 'didn't have'), awkward clause 'to my school to charge' unclear and likely incorrect word choice; 'to school' is sufficient; word order 'I used that bicycle always' is nonstandard — place 'always' before the verb or before the object ('I always used'). Also replace 'which' with 'that' for defining relative clause. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense, use clear phrases ('ride to school'), and put adverbs in natural positions ('I always used').

× Absolutely, I believe that in my country bikes are very popular because it is easy to ride and in my country the biggest problem is parking.

✓ Absolutely, I believe that in my country bikes are very popular because they are easy to ride, and the biggest problem is parking.

Pronoun-antecedent and tense/agreement: 'it is easy to ride' should refer to 'bikes' (plural), so use 'they are easy to ride'. Repeating 'in my country' is redundant; remove repetition. Keep present tense 'are' for general truths. Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns and avoid unnecessary repetition.

× The bikes will help to park easily and we don't want so much place to park and do things.

✓ Bikes make parking easier because they do not need as much space, so they help us get around and do things more easily.

Several problems: modal/future unnecessary ('will help to park easily') and unnatural phrasing. 'We don't want so much place to park' is ungrammatical — likely meant 'they don't require so much parking space' or 'we don't need as much space to park them'. Also 'and do things' is vague. Suggestion: use clear subject ('bikes'), correct verb forms ('make parking easier', 'do not require'), and clearer connectors ('so they help us...').