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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, in my country all the children used to bike. Every afternoon with my friends.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is correct but too short and lacks detail. Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. For example, mention when you got the bike, what it looked like, or a short memory about riding it to make the response more natural and informative.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and it was a bright red mountain bike with training wheels. Later, I learned to ride without them and often rode to the park with my friends after school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is informal and slightly imprecise. Avoid absolute words like “all” unless certain, and combine sentences for coherence using linking words. Add a brief reason or contrast (e.g., why they are popular and whether this is changing) to show depth.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among children and teenagers. For example, when I was young many kids rode bikes every afternoon to play with friends, although nowadays more people use scooters or public transport in cities.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, in my country all the children used to bike. Every afternoon with my friends.

Yes, in my country all the children used to ride bikes every afternoon with my friends.

The original reply is fragmented and has awkward phrasing. 'Used to bike' is acceptable but 'bike' as a verb is less formal; 'ride bikes' is clearer. The second fragment 'Every afternoon with my friends.' is not a complete sentence (sentence structure error). Combine ideas into one full sentence and place adverbial phrase 'every afternoon' in a natural position: '...ride bikes every afternoon with my friends.' Also ensure tense matches the past habitual 'used to.'

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