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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a back when I am and when I was 11. When I was 11, I got it from my father and I usually rolled it to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't think bike is popular in my country because in my country I can see cars more than bikes.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: 句子有多处语法和用词错误,影响表达清晰度。回答应直接回应问题并使用正确动词时态。建议:1) 修正基本语法(例如 'back' 应为 'bike','when I am' 应为 'when I was'),2) 用一到两句清楚描述重要信息(什么时候、有谁给的、通常怎么做),3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯,比如 'then' 或 'so'。示例句长度不要超过5句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I received it from my father when I was 11, and I usually rode it to school every day.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 表达意思基本明确但有语法和词汇问题,且论证不够具体。建议:1) 修正冠词和复数('bike' → 'bikes'),2) 给出至少一个具体原因或例子(例如城市规划、交通安全或气候),3) 使用连接词如 'because'、'for example' 使逻辑更清晰,最多用三句。

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, our cities have few bike lanes, so cycling can feel unsafe.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I had a back when I am and when I was 11.

Yes, I had a bike when I was young and when I was 11.

原句存在多处问题:1) “back” 是拼写错误,应为 “bike”。2) “when I am” 时态和表达不正确,应为过去时 “when I was” 来与过去持有自行车的时间一致。总体属于句子结构与时态混用错误。建议:注意单词拼写,保持时态一致(此处用过去时),并使用合适的时间表达(如 "when I was young" 或直接只用 "when I was 11")。

Past tense issue

× When I was 11, I got it from my father and I usually rolled it to school.

When I was 11, I got it from my father and I usually rode it to school.

问题在于动词用法:英文中表示骑自行车应使用 "ride" 的过去式 "rode",而原句用 "rolled"(滚动)意义不符。此外句子时态一致,前半用过去式 'got',后半也应使用过去习惯 'usually rode'(可以保留 'usually' 表示习惯)。建议记住常用动词搭配:ride a bike/ride a horse。

Incorrect use of quantifiers / Singular and plural issue

× I don't think bike is popular in my country because in my country I can see cars more than bikes.

I don't think bikes are popular in my country because I can see cars more than bikes.

原句有两个问题:1) 主语缺乏复数或定冠词,"bike is" 不自然。应使用复数 "bikes are" 来表示一般性看法(或使用定冠词/不定冠词视上下文)。这涉及单复数和主谓一致。2) 句子重复使用 "in my country" 冗余,可省略第二处。建议:在谈一般性事物时用复数(bikes are popular),并保证主谓一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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