Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
I had a bike when I was a child in my childhood so but I don't usually like ride a bike because I think that it's very hard and tough to ride it and I usually fall. I I usually fall down when I was a child. So this is the reason why I do not ride it like very usual.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think that it's like so popular because in my country people are used more used to write like public vehicles or drive their own ones because we don't have biking tracks in our country. So this is not very usual in our country.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更简洁、有条理并直接回应问题。注意避免重复(如“when I was a child”重复出现),使用一到两句主题句然后补充具体细节。可以用连接词(because, so, therefore)来提高连贯性,并提供一个具体例子或短时间描述来支持观点。此外注意时态一致(过去时描述童年经历)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I rarely rode it because I found balancing difficult and often fell off; for example, I remember scraping my knee once and then avoided cycling for a long time.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰地表达原因并提供具体细节或例子。避免语法错误(e.g., 'used to write' 应为 'used to ride' 或 'use'),并使用连接词(for example, because, so)来衔接句子。可以指出具体交通习惯、基础设施缺乏等事实以增强说服力。保持句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think cycling is very popular in my country because most people prefer public transportation or driving. For example, there are very few dedicated bike lanes in cities, so cycling is neither convenient nor considered safe.
× I had a bike when I was a child in my childhood so but I don't usually like ride a bike because I think that it's very hard and tough to ride it and I usually fall.
✓ I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn't usually like riding it because I thought it was very hard and I often fell.
这是过去时相关的错误。句子中谈论过去的习惯和感受时,应使用过去时:把现在时和现在习惯(like, think, usually fall)改为过去式(didn't like, thought, often fell)。另外,动词“like”后接动名词“riding”。建议:叙述过去经历时,整体保持过去时一致。
× I I usually fall down when I was a child.
✓ I usually fell down when I was a child.
这里混用了现在时和过去时。因为说的是“当我还是小孩的时候”,应使用过去时,把“fall”改为过去式“fell”。建议:描述过去习惯用过去式(usually + 过去式)。
× So this is the reason why I do not ride it like very usual.
✓ So this is the reason why I don't ride it very often.
句子想表达“我不常骑”,这是现在一般情况,应使用现在时。原句中“like very usual”结构不正确,常用表达是“very often”或“very usually(不常用)”。建议:用固定搭配“don't ride it very often”。
× I don't think that it's like so popular because in my country people are used more used to write like public vehicles or drive their own ones because we don't have biking tracks in our country.
✓ I don't think they are very popular because in my country people are more used to taking public vehicles or driving their own cars, and we don't have bike tracks.
这里有现在时态和习惯表达的问题:应使用一般现在时描述普遍现象(don't think, are, are used to taking/driving)。原句中“used more used to write like public vehicles”是错误搭配,正确应为“used to taking public vehicles”或“used to use public transport”;“drive their own ones”也不自然,应为“drive their own cars”。建议:用“be more used to + -ing”表示更习惯于做某事,并用常见词汇如“public vehicles/public transport, cars”。
× So this is not very usual in our country.
✓ So this is not very common in our country.
“usual”在此处用法不自然,英语更常用“common”来表示某事普遍或常见。虽然意思能被理解,但应使用更地道的形容词。建议:用“common”或“popular”来表达“普遍/常见”。