Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Sure, I have eyes on my Allen how to wire things when I was small.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I not really think so because umm, people try more than like.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 32.0Gợi ý: 问题理解与表达不清晰:考生的回答与问题不相关且含有语法错误,句子不自然。建议先直接回答(有/没有),然后用简短句子补充细节(什么时候、和谁、感觉如何或用途)。注意语法时态(过去式)和词汇选择,避免不相关的词。可以练习把句子控制在最多5句内,并使用连接词如“and”或“because”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bicycle when I was about seven. I learned to ride it in the park near my house with my older brother, and I rode it almost every day during summer. It was my favorite way to play and it helped me feel independent.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 表达模糊且语法错误:回答含糊、语法和用词不正确,缺乏具体理由或例子。建议先给出清晰立场(Yes/No/Partly),然后用一两句具体原因和例子支持观点,使用连接词如“because”、“for example”。注意主语与动词一致及完整句子结构。
Ví dụ: I don't think they are very popular in cities because most people prefer cars and public transport. For example, in my city there are few bike lanes and people worry about safety, so only a small number of commuters cycle regularly.
× Sure, I have eyes on my Allen how to wire things when I was small.
✓ Sure, I used to watch my uncle Allen wiring things when I was small.
句子结构混乱:原句“I have eyes on my Allen how to wire things when I was small”在英语中不可理解。应该使用“used to”表示过去常做的动作,并使用正确的名词(uncle)和动词短语“watch ... wiring”。另外“have eyes on”不是描述观察的自然表达。建议改为“I used to watch my uncle Allen wiring things when I was small.” 这样时态与提问(过去)一致,结构清晰。
× I not really think so because umm, people try more than like.
✓ I don't really think so because, um, people prefer other things.
包含多项错误:缺少助动词导致否定形式错误,应使用“don't”;“people try more than like”不是正确表达,需用“prefer”或“like more”来表达比较倾向。整理句子并去掉多余词“than”。建议使用“I don't really think so because people prefer other things.” 保持一般现在时,符合讨论普遍观点。