Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and organization. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitation sounds and repetitive words; correct tense and articles (“When I was a child”, “my family was”). Keep within 2–4 sentences to sound natural.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually walked or took public transport. However, now in Taiwan I often use the YouBike rental system because it is convenient and cheap.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then support with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Fix vocabulary and article errors (YouBike, not EU), and complete your final thought instead of trailing off. Use connectors such as “because”, “so”, or “therefore” to make your reasoning coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because of the YouBike rental system. For example, the system is cheap and easy to use, so many people choose bikes for short trips instead of driving, which also saves time searching for parking.

× When I was child I didn't have a bike because umm umm, my family is pretty poor so we don't get enough money to buy the bike.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bike because my family was pretty poor, so we didn't have enough money to buy one.

Errors: missing article before 'child' and inconsistent tense/verb choice and awkward phrasing. Use 'a child' (article error, ID 22/17) and keep past tense consistent: 'my family was pretty poor' and 'we didn't have enough money'. Also use 'buy one' instead of 'buy the bike' for natural reference. Suggestion: add the article, maintain past tense throughout, and use natural noun reference.

× But in Taiwan, uh, we have U bike rental system.

✓ But in Taiwan we have a YouBike rental system.

Original lacks article 'a' before 'U bike rental system' (article error ID 22) and uses an unclear form 'U bike'; correct proper name is 'YouBike' or 'a bike rental system'. Suggestion: include the indefinite article and use the proper name or 'bike rental system' for clarity.

× It's very convenient for me.

✓ It was very convenient for me.

Context is past (speaking about childhood experience), so tense should match past. Change present 'is' to past 'was' (present tense issue ID 6). Suggestion: match verb tense to time reference.

× Like I said, umm in my country we have EU bike rental system and it's very convenient and cost effective.

✓ Like I said, in my country we have a YouBike rental system and it is very convenient and cost-effective.

Missing article 'a' before 'EU bike rental system' (article error ID 22) and 'EU' is likely wrong; use 'YouBike' or 'a bike rental system'. Also 'cost effective' needs hyphen when used as adjective. Suggestion: add article, correct name, and hyphenate compound adjective.

× Umm because it's cut down a lot of time to looking for parking space or.

✓ Because it cuts down a lot of time looking for a parking space.

Several issues: sentence fragment starting with 'Umm because' and incorrect verb form 'it's cut down' (should be present simple 'it cuts down' for general fact) and unnecessary 'to looking' (verb + -ing form error ID 8). Also 'parking space' needs an article. Suggestion: remove filler, use 'it cuts down' and 'looking' without 'to', and add 'a' before 'parking space'.