Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. I like bicycle.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes I see and especially an bicycle when and children very like umm.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答需更自然和時態正確。首先用過去式表達兒童時期經驗,並提供一個主題句和1–2句具體細節,例如誰給你的、常去哪裡騎或你喜歡騎車的原因。避免單句片語,控制在不超過5句並使用連接詞使語意流暢。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was a child because my parents bought it for me on my sixth birthday. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon, which helped me feel independent and active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 36.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰、有條理並提供具體支持細節。先給出一個明確立場,然後用連接詞(for example, because, and)說明原因並舉例證明,例如在哪些地方常見、哪些年齡層使用較多或政府是否支持騎行。避免口頭禪(umm)和語法混亂。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips in cities because they are cheap and convenient, and many children ride bikes to school in the suburbs.
× Yes, I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
该句在回答过去的经历时应使用过去时。考官问的是“Did you have... when you were a child?”(过去式),所以回答也应使用过去时态。将现在完成/现在时的“Yes, I have.”改为过去式“Yes, I did.”可与问题时态一致。建议:遇到以Did开头的过去时问句,用过去时回答(例如:Yes, I did/No, I didn’t)。
× I like bicycle.
✓ I liked bicycles.
原句中有两个问题:一是时态应与上下文的过去时间一致(因为在谈童年),应使用过去时liked;二是名词bicycle前缺少冠词或应使用复数以表达一般喜好。更自然的表达是用复数“I liked bicycles.”或使用不定冠词“I liked a bicycle.”如果指某辆特定的自行车,可说“I liked my bicycle.” 建议:根据上下文选择时态和冠词,谈过去的习惯用过去时并常用复数表示一般偏好。
× Yes I see and especially an bicycle when and children very like umm.
✓ Yes, I think they are, and especially children really like bicycles.
原句结构混乱,时态、人称和词序都不正确:1)“Yes I see”不符合回答“Do you think...?”的常用表达,应该用“I think so”或“Yes, I think they are.”;2)“an bicycle”错误使用不定冠词(bicycle以辅音音素开头,应为 a bicycle),但此处更自然用复数bicycles;3)“when and children very like”语序不对,缺主谓结构且语法不通。综合改为“Yes, I think they are, and especially children really like bicycles.” 更符合语法和语义。建议:回答意见类问题可用“I think so/Yes, I think they are.” 表示观点;谈普遍现象用复数名词并注意主谓结构和词序。