Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔で主題に触れていますが、文法ミス、繰り返し、語順の不自然さ、具体的な詳細不足が見られます。次の点を改善してください：1) 完全な文を使う（主節と時制の一致）。2) 繰り返しを避ける。3) 詳細（いつ、どんな場面で与えられたか、どう感じたか）を一つか二つ補う。4) 接続語（for example, and, so, because）を使って論理的に繋げる。例としては「It was a pink bike given to me by a friend of my father when I was about eight, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood.」のように述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a pink bicycle given to me by a friend of my father when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. I loved it because it made me feel free, but I eventually left it behind when we moved to a new house.

Gợi ý: 答えは意見を述べていますが、発言が繰り返しや不自然な表現を含み、具体例や理由が十分に整理されていません。改善点：1) イントロのトピック文を明確にする（Yes, they are very popular.）。2) 理由を2点程度に絞り、接続詞（because, for example, additionally）で結ぶ。3) 不要な語の繰り返しを避け、具体的な例（通勤や学生の利用、都市部での自転車専用レーン）を挙げる。4) 文は3–4文に収める。改善例として「Yes, bikes are very popular in Japan because many people use them for short commutes and students often cycle to school. For example, urban areas have bike parking and lanes, which makes cycling convenient.」のように話してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Japan. Many people use bicycles for short commutes or to get to school because they are cheap and convenient. For example, cities often provide bike parking and dedicated lanes, so cycling is an efficient way to travel for daily errands.

× Yes, I had.

✓ Yes, I did.

The student used 'I had' without an object, which is ambiguous. The question asks whether they owned a bike, so the natural short answer in past tense is 'Yes, I did.' Use the auxiliary 'did' to refer back to the action/state in a yes/no question about the past.

× I remember it's given by my friends, my my father's friends.

✓ I remember it was given by my father's friend.

The student used 'it's given' (present passive) incorrectly for a past event and repeated 'my'. Also 'my father's friends' implies plural givers but context likely intends a single friend. Use past passive 'it was given' and correct possessive/pronoun order. If multiple givers were meant, use 'my father's friends gave it to me.'

× It was a pink bike, but I think I left somewhere, somewhere so I don't have now.

✓ It was a pink bike, but I think I left it somewhere, so I don't have it now.

The sentence misses the object pronoun 'it' after 'left' and 'have'. Include 'it' to refer to the bike. Also remove the repeated 'somewhere' and add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in Japan you can see so many people riding bike bikes on the road and some of them use it as goes when they go to, when they go work or go somewhere.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in Japan you can see so many people riding bikes on the road, and some of them use them as a means of transport when they go to work or go somewhere.

Use plural 'bikes' after 'riding' and plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'bikes'. The phrase 'use it as goes' is ungrammatical; replace with 'use them as a means of transport' and correct the verb phrase 'go to work'. Also add commas to separate clauses.

× Sometimes it's more.

✓ Sometimes it's more convenient.

The fragment 'Sometimes it's more.' is incomplete and vague. Add an adjective like 'convenient' to complete the comparison implied by 'more.' Choose a word that matches context (e.g., 'convenient', 'common', 'affordable').