Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did have a bike when I were a child and my grandpa taught me how to ride a bike and now I really enjoy it and I see it as my hobby and I really enjoy the time I ride a bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's really popular in my country. I always see people riding bicycle on street to go to work or go to school. And I always see the there are some championship about riding bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 注意主谓一致和时态错误(例如 were → was),并且回答应更简洁、有层次:先用一句话直接回答并给出原因或细节,最多控制在3–4句内。可以增加具体细节(比如年龄、学习骑车的经历、骑车的频率或特殊回忆),并使用连接词使句子更连贯。避免重复“really enjoy”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandfather taught me to ride it when I was about seven, and I remember practicing every afternoon until I felt confident. Since then, cycling has become a hobby I still enjoy because it helps me relax and stay fit.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 改善语法和措辞(例如 'riding bicycle' → 'riding bicycles',去掉多余词 'the there'),并提供更具体的例子或数据以增强论点。建议先给一个概括性判断,然后用1–2个具体支持点(通勤、运动赛事、政府倡导等),使用连接词如 'for example'、'also' 来衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many people commute to work and school by bike because it's cheap and convenient. Also, there are regular cycling events and even national championships that attract large crowds.
× Yes, I did have a bike when I were a child and my grandpa taught me how to ride a bike and now I really enjoy it and I see it as my hobby and I really enjoy the time I ride a bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandpa taught me how to ride it, and now I really enjoy cycling; I consider it my hobby and I enjoy the time I spend riding a bike.
错误类型:过去时使用错误。说明:句中出现了 did have 与 were 的混用问题。1) 在一般过去时的陈述句中,不需要使用 did + 动词原形(除非是强调或否定),应直接用过去式 had。2) 主语 I 的过去式系动词应为 was,而不是 were。3) 原句连成一长句,时态与结构混乱,且重复表达(really enjoy 多次)。改进建议:将句子拆分为几句,直接使用过去式 had 和 was;对现在情况用现在时(现在仍喜欢骑车),避免重复表达。示例改法已给出。
× Yes, I think it's really popular in my country. I always see people riding bicycle on street to go to work or go to school.
✓ Yes, I think it's very popular in my country. I often see people riding bicycles on the street to go to work or to school.
错误类型:介词和相关短语使用错误。说明:1) riding bicycle 应为 riding bicycles(名词复数或使用 a bicycle);2) on street 应为 on the street(需要定冠词 the);3) to go to work or go to school 中第二个不定式要一致,建议保持 to。改进建议:使用复数形式 bicycles,添加定冠词 the,并保持不定式结构一致。
× And I always see the there are some championship about riding bike.
✓ I also often see that there are some championships about cycling.
错误类型:句子结构错误。说明:原句 'I always see the there are...' 语序混乱且多余 the;championship 应为复数 championships;about riding bike 更自然的表达是 about cycling 或 related to cycling。改进建议:调整语序为 I often see that there are...,将名词改为复数,并使用更地道的短语 cycling。