Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, correct grammar, and give a clearer reason. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details. Use correct verb tenses and articles (e.g., 'when I was a child') and avoid repeating the same idea.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of riding. For that reason, my parents only bought me a scooter, and I preferred walking short distances instead.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, then give specific supporting details using linking words. Correct plural and article errors (people, cars, nearby). Use varied vocabulary (commute, recreational cyclists, everyday transport) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use bicycles to commute short distances and students ride them to school, while others use sports bikes for exercise. However, cars are still common for long journeys, so bicycles are mainly used for daily local travel.

× I didn't have a bike when I was child because I'm scared of driving so that's why I don't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was scared of riding one, so I still don't have a bike.

This sentence has multiple issues: missing article before 'child' and inappropriate tense and verb choice. Use 'a child' (article error). 'Scared of driving' is wrong for bicycles; use 'scared of riding one'. Maintain past tense for the childhood reason ('I was scared') and clarify present result with 'I still don't have a bike'. Suggestion: divide into two clauses and keep consistent tense when describing past feelings and present situation. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes of course in my country bikes are more important.

✓ Yes, of course, bikes are very common in my country.

The original 'bikes are more important' is unnatural; 'important' is not the correct quantifier for popularity. Use 'common' or 'popular'. Also add commas after introductory phrases. Suggestion: choose vocabulary that matches meaning (popular/common) and include punctuation for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Some peoples are like sports bikes and some are just use a normal bikes to travel in a near space.

✓ Some people like sports bikes, and some just use a normal bike to travel short distances.

Errors: 'peoples' should be 'people' (plural noun), 'are like' should be 'like' (verb usage), 'are just use' is ungrammatical (remove 'are'), 'a normal bikes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'bikes' (singular 'bike'), and 'in a near space' is unnatural; use 'short distances'. Suggestion: use correct noun form 'people', correct verb patterns ('people like'), match articles with noun number, and use natural collocations for distance. Grammar problem type ID:1

× But another people also use a car for driving.

✓ But other people also use cars to drive.

'Another people' is incorrect: use 'other people'. 'Use a car for driving' is wordy; 'use cars to drive' or 'drive cars' is natural. Also pluralize 'car' to match general statement. Suggestion: use 'other people' for the rest of the group and choose a concise verb phrase. Grammar problem type ID:26

× But if I compare a car with bikes, bikes are more popular than a cars in my.

✓ But if I compare cars with bikes, bikes are more popular than cars in my country.

Errors: 'a car' vs 'bikes' should be parallel; use plural 'cars' to compare categories. 'a cars' mixes article with plural; remove article. 'in my' is incomplete; add 'country'. Ensure subject-verb agreement is fine by using plural nouns on both sides. Suggestion: keep parallel structures when comparing and complete the prepositional phrase. Grammar problem type ID:27