Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I have. I used to have a pink bike and I love it very much when I were child. I like to ride it to school every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Well I think back used to be popular in my country last decade but now it is replaced by cars because cars are more con convenient and fast.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 语言时态和主谓一致有错误,句子结构也稍混乱,回答可更自然、更简洁,同时补充一两条具体细节。例如:使用正确的过去时(had/ loved/ was)并用连接词使句子连贯。最多不要超过5句。可练习把主题句放在开头,然后用1-2句具体细节支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a pink bike when I was a child and I loved it. I often rode it to school because it was convenient and fun, and I remember racing my friends on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达含糊且有语法与词汇错误(如“back used to be”),论证不够具体。建议用更清晰的主题句,然后给出具体原因和对比,使用连接词如“but”“because”“however”。控制在最多5句。可以补充数据、例子或个人观察来增加说服力。
Ví dụ: Bikes were more popular in my country about ten years ago, but now cars are dominant because they are more convenient and faster for long distances. However, cycling is still common in cities for short trips and among people who want cheaper or greener transport.
× Yes I have.
✓ Yes, I did.
原句使用現在式“have”回應過去的提問(Did you have...?),時態不一致。應使用過去式“did”來簡短回答過去的事。建議:當問句為過去式(Did...)時,回答也用過去式(Yes, I did. / No, I didn't.)。
× I used to have a pink bike and I love it very much when I were child.
✓ I used to have a pink bike and I loved it very much when I was a child.
句中有兩處時態/形式錯誤:第一,“I used to have”正確表達過去習慣,但後半句應與之保持過去時態,故用“loved”而非現在式“love”。第二,“when I were child”主語“I”應搭配單數過去式動詞“was”,並且需要冠詞“a”。建議:描述過去經歷時保持過去時態;主語“I”過去式為“was”,並加上適當冠詞。
× I like to ride it to school every day.
✓ I liked to ride it to school every day.
整段描述發生在過去(童年),此句使用現在式“like”時態不一致,應改為過去式“liked”。建議:敘述過去習慣時使用過去式(liked / used to ride)。
× Well I think back used to be popular in my country last decade but now it is replaced by cars because cars are more con convenient and fast.
✓ Well, I think bikes used to be popular in my country last decade, but now they have been replaced by cars because cars are more convenient and faster.
原句問題包括多處:1) “back” 用法錯誤,應為“bikes”(名詞);2) “I think back used to be popular” 結構混亂,需改為“I think bikes used to be popular”或“I thought...”視語氣而定;3) “it is replaced by cars” 主語應為複數“they”,且現在完成被動“have been replaced”更合適表示至今的變化;4) “con convenient” 為打字錯誤,應為“convenient”;5) “and fast” 應用比較級“faster”來比較與自行車的速度。建議:注意名詞正確使用與主謂一致,選擇合適時態(現在完成表示已發生並影響現在),並使用比較級比較兩者。