Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I always rode it to my neighbor's home and played with them.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are popular in Taiwan. People usually ride a bike when they have to travel in short distance.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且相关,但可以提高自然性与细节丰富度。建议在开头用一句主题句更自然,例如描述拥有自行车的时间或类型,随后用1–2句具体细节(何时、去哪里、和谁、感受或一次特别的回忆)。避免冗长重复,句子数控制在3–4句以内,并使用连接词如“because”、“so”来衔接原因和结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a small red bike during my childhood. I often rode it to my neighbors’ house to play with friends because it was the quickest way to get there. One time I fell off and learned to be more careful, which made me more confident about riding.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答简明但可加入更多具体例子与对比以增强说服力。建议在主题句后用连接词补充原因或例子(例如通勤、休闲、旅游)、说明具体场景(城市、乡间)并可以比较其他交通方式。保持回答自然,用词准确(例如“short distances”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in Taiwan, especially in cities like Taipei. Many people use them for short distances such as commuting to work or going to the market because they are convenient and inexpensive. In addition, bike-sharing systems have made cycling even more common.
× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and I always rode it to my neighbor's home and played with them.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I always rode it to my neighbor's homes and played with them.
问题类型:主谓一致/复数形式(与列表中第1或27相关,但更合适为复数名词问题)。该句中“neighbor's home”在指多个邻居时应使用复数形式“neighbors' homes”或更自然地用“my neighbors' homes”或“my neighbors”来表达。如果学生指的是经常去一个邻居家,则保持单数,但后半句“played with them”表明有多名邻居,所以应把“neighbor's home”改为复数所有格或改为复数名词。建议使用“my neighbors' homes”或更自然的“my neighbors”。此外,句子中缺少逗号以连接两个并列分句,加入逗号可使句子更清晰。建议改为:"Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I always rode it to my neighbors' homes and played with them." 或更简洁的:"Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I always rode it to my neighbors and played with them."
× People usually ride a bike when they have to travel in short distance.
✓ People usually ride a bike when they have to travel a short distance.
问题类型:介词使用错误。短语应为“a short distance”而不是“in short distance”。在英语中表示短途旅行一般用“travel a short distance”或“travel short distances”。“in short distance”不是地道表达。建议使用单数可数短语加不定冠词,或复数形式:"travel a short distance" 或 "travel short distances"。