Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, tense and completeness. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then briefly add one supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I remember sometimes borrowing my neighbour's bike to ride around the park, which I enjoyed a lot.

Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a clear opinion with a reason and an example. Use linking words to connect your idea and a supporting detail. Avoid unrelated numbers or misspellings.

Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For example, in my city public transport is limited, so families usually buy cars instead of bikes.

× No, I don't have bike when I.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Errors: incorrect tense and missing verb parts. The question asked about the past ('Did you have... when you were a child?'), so the student must use past simple: 'didn't have'. Also missing the article 'a' before 'bike' and the clause 'when I' is incomplete; it should be 'when I was a child' to match the examiner's question. Suggestion: Use past simple for past events, include necessary articles, and complete time clauses (e.g., 'when I was a child'). Grammar problem type and ID: 5: Past tense issue; 22: Article errors; 26: Sentence structure errors

× Four children in our country, bites are not that popular.

✓ For children in our country, bikes are not that popular.

Errors: 'Four' is a misspelling of 'For' (word choice), 'bites' is a misspelling of 'bikes', and the sentence structure is awkward. The corrected sentence 'For children in our country, bikes are not that popular' uses correct preposition 'for' and correct noun 'bikes'. Alternatively: 'Bikes are not very popular among children in our country.' Suggestion: Check homophones and spelling, ensure correct prepositions ('for' vs 'four') and place the subject near the verb for clarity. Grammar problem type and ID: 11: Incorrect use of prepositions; 26: Sentence structure errors; 1: Singular and plural issue