Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did. I read back when I was little.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
This is very popular. I often see popular reading books on the setting.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 28.0Gợi ý: 回答不够相关且有语法错误。首先要直接回应问题并给出一两句补充说明。注意时态和动词使用(应使用 “ride” 而不是 “read”)。可以说明是否拥有、谁给的、骑车的场合或感受。句子不要冗长,控制在最多5句内,并使用连接词如 "because" 或 "so" 来组织信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bike that my parents bought for me when I was six, and I rode it every afternoon around the neighborhood because it was my main way to play with friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 22.0Gợi ý: 回答与问题不匹配且有明显词汇错误。应先直接表达观点(popular or not),然后给出具体理由或例子。避免使用不相关的词(如 “reading books”)。使用连接词如 "because"、"for example" 来衔接细节,并提供具体场景(如通勤、休闲、运动)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise; for example, you can often see cyclists on bike lanes and in parks during weekends.
× Yes, I did. I read back when I was little.
✓ Yes, I did. I used to ride one when I was little.
句子中使用了动词“read”(读),但语境是在谈论童年是否有自行车,应使用动词“ride”(骑)。此外原句缺少适当的时态表达,使用“used to + 动词原形”更自然地表示过去经常性的动作:"I used to ride one when I was little." 建议记住常见动词 ride(骑)与 read(读)发音相近但拼写和含义不同,写作时注意区分;表达过去习惯用法可用 used to 或简单过去时。
× This is very popular. I often see popular reading books on the setting.
✓ They are very popular. I often see bikes in public places.
原句中出现代词与指代不一致的问题。问题在于提问是关于“bikes”(复数),回答却用“This is”(单数指示代词),应使用复数代词“they”。另外“popular reading books on the setting”完全不符合语境,可能是错误翻译或词序混乱。将其改为“I often see bikes in public places.”(我经常在公共场所看到自行车)更符合语境。建议:注意主语的数(单复数)一致,代词要与被指代名词保持一致;使用与语境相关的短语(如 in public places, on the street)。