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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I do.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Uh, yes, uh, of course it is very popular, uh, transportation mode transportation, uh, almost like every single person in their childhood had rode the bicycle. Especially in the village, a lot of people are still using bicycle for their daily, uh, transportation mode model.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Be direct and use past tense for a childhood question; expand slightly with one or two supporting details. Avoid filler words. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that I rode to play with my friends and go to school on weekends. It was my main way to get around the neighbourhood.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (e.g., subject-verb agreement and past participles), remove hesitations, and provide two specific supporting points linked logically. Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' and avoid repeating words. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country. For example, many children learn to ride one at an early age, and in rural areas people still use bicycles for daily transport because they are cheap and convenient.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yeah, I do.

Yes, I did.

The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense, so the response should also be in the past tense. 'I do' is present tense; the correct reply is 'I did.' Use matching tense to maintain temporal consistency.

Present tense issue

× Uh, yes, uh, of course it is very popular, uh, transportation mode transportation, uh, almost like every single person in their childhood had rode the bicycle.

Yes, of course bicycles are a very popular mode of transportation; almost every person rode a bicycle in their childhood.

Multiple mistakes: the main verb tense and subject-verb agreement are wrong for current general fact ('it is very popular' should match plural 'bicycles' so 'bicycles are very popular'), and 'had rode' is incorrect past perfect form (should be simple past 'rode' or past perfect 'had ridden' depending on context). Also word order and repetition ('transportation mode transportation') are redundant. Use plural subject for 'bicycles' and simple past 'rode' to state a general past habit.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Especially in the village, a lot of people are still using bicycle for their daily, uh, transportation mode model.

Especially in villages, many people still use bicycles for their daily transportation.

Preposition and article usage: use plural 'villages' or 'the villages' depending on meaning; 'using bicycle' should be 'use bicycles' (plural, noun form) and 'for their daily transportation' is the correct phrase. Also 'a lot of' is informal—'many' is clearer. Remove redundant word 'mode model.' Use present simple 'use' to describe habitual present action.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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