Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, because the breakfast in are properly. In the country, the children is like it.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回应考官的问题,而是把问题重复了。根据评分标准,先给出一个明确的主题句(例如:Yes, I did / No, I didn’t),然后如有必要提供一到两句具体细节。保持回答自然、简洁,最多5句。你可以补充什么时候得到自行车、是谁送的、用途或感受等细节,并使用连接词如“because”或“so”来增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven because my parents wanted me to be more active. I used to ride it to school and around the neighborhood with my friends, which made my childhood very fun.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有语法错误,内容与问题不相关(提到早餐而不是自行车流行的原因)。应直接回答并提供具体原因和例子。使用连词(for example, because, so)使逻辑清晰,注意主谓一致和正确词汇(例如 popular, safe, convenient)。控制在1–3句内,避免无关信息。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students ride bikes to school and people use them to run errands in busy city areas.
× Yes, because the breakfast in are properly.
✓ Yes, because bicycles are practical and affordable.
句子结构不通顺且词语使用不当。“the breakfast in are properly”没有语法或语义逻辑,无法表达与前句相关的理由。应使用与“bikes are popular”相关的原因词语,如“practical(实用)”或“affordable(价格合适)”。建议用简单主语+系动词+表语或主语+系动词+形容词结构来说明原因,例如“bicycles are practical and affordable”。
× In the country, the children is like it.
✓ In the country, children like them.
原句主谓不一致:复数主语“children”不能与单数动词“is”连用。此外,代词指代不明确。改为复数动词“like”并用复数代词“them”或将句子改为“In my country, children like bikes.” 更清晰。建议记住主语为复数时动词也用复数形式(现在时一般动词在第三人称单数加 -s)。