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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, my father bought me a bag when I was a child and he taught me how to write it, but I lose the advice was six years old. It was a pity.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, definitely. In my country nearly all people write backs because some of some of those things that bikes, riding bikes can help people to exercise and build a strong body to resist disease.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: 首先,句子有多处词汇使用和语法错误,导致表达不清。回答应直接回应问题并提供简短具体细节,控制在最多5句话。建议把“bag/write/lose/advice”纠正为“bike/ride/lost/learn”或类似正确词汇,并按时间顺序说明何时拥有、谁教的、何时停止使用和感受。使用连接词(e.g. and, but, when)使答案连贯。示例句子结构:主题句+一到两条具体细节+简短感想。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me and taught me how to ride when I was about five. I used it every day to go to school and play with friends, but I stopped using it when I moved to the city at six. I remember feeling sad to give it up because it was my favorite toy.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明确肯定但句子结构混乱,词汇错误频繁(例如“write backs”“some of some of those things”),影响表达清晰度。建议直接给出观点后用一到两条具体理由支持,并使用恰当连接词(because, for example, also)。提供具体例子或对比(如城市与农村的差异)可提高分数。注意词汇准确性,如 use “ride bikes”, “popular”, “exercise”, “stay healthy”。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for daily commuting and exercise. For example, in cities people ride bikes to work to avoid traffic, and in rural areas they are an affordable way to travel. Riding regularly helps people stay fit and reduce medical expenses.

Ngữ pháp

22: Article errors

× Yes, my father bought me a bag when I was a child and he taught me how to write it, but I lose the advice was six years old. It was a pity.

Yes, my father bought me a bike when I was a child and he taught me how to ride it, but I lost the bike when I was six years old. It was a pity.

错误类型标为“Article errors”(此句中也包含其他错误,但根据要求只更正列表内的类型)。然而原句主要问题是名词使用错误和拼写错误:原句用“bag”“write”“lose the advice”均不符合语境,正确应为“bike”“ride”“lost the bike”。建议:注意名词和动词的拼写与语义搭配,‘bike’(自行车)而不是‘bag’(包);‘ride’是骑车应使用的动词;表明过去丢失应使用过去式‘lost’并明确丢失的对象。改进方法:多读带语境的例句,背诵常见词对(如 bike — ride),写作时检查单词拼写与上下文一致。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, definitely. In my country nearly all people write backs because some of some of those things that bikes, riding bikes can help people to exercise and build a strong body to resist disease.

Yes, definitely. In my country nearly everyone rides bikes because riding can help people exercise and build a strong body to resist disease.

句子中存在多处问题,这里按‘Incorrect use of prepositions’类型只更正与介词及搭配相关的部分:原句中使用“In my country nearly all people write backs”明显词错且搭配错误,应为“nearly everyone rides bikes”;此外短语“help people to exercise”中的不定式也可简化为“help people exercise”。建议:注意动词与名词的搭配(ride a bike / ride bikes),用法上常说‘people exercise’或‘help people exercise’而不是‘write backs’或重复多余的片段。改进方法:练习常用动词短语和介词搭配,听力和阅读中注意固定搭配并做笔记。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

OldElderly; Dilapidated; Worn; Antique; Mature
StrongPowerful; Forceful; Secure; Durable; Forceful
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