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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I had a bike when I was a child and I usually use to play with my NA neighborhood and friends.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do because a lot of people had it and also using it when when I walk in the street they use a bike to transport.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih alami dan jelas. Hindari kesalahan seperti 'use to' dan kata yang tidak perlu ('NA'). Mulai dengan kalimat topik singkat, lalu tambahkan satu atau dua detail pendukung dengan kata penghubung yang tepat. Misalnya jelaskan seberapa sering Anda menggunakannya atau kegiatan yang biasa dilakukan.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it almost every day to ride around my neighborhood and play games with my friends, so it became my favorite way to spend the afternoons.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Perbaiki tata bahasa, pengulangan kata ('when when'), dan ketepatan waktu (had -> have). Susun jawaban dengan kalimat utama diikuti alasan yang jelas dan contoh konkret. Gunakan kata penghubung seperti 'because' atau 'for example' untuk membuat penjelasan lebih logis.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and daily commuting. For example, I often see people riding bikes to the market or to work along main streets.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I had a bike when I was a child and I usually use to play with my NA neighborhood and friends.

I had a bike when I was a child and I usually used to play with my neighborhood and friends.

The phrase 'use to' is incorrect; the correct form for habitual actions in the past is 'used to'. Also 'NA' is extraneous and should be removed. Use 'used to' to indicate past habitual actions. Suggestion: say 'I usually used to play with my neighborhood and friends.'

Past tense issue

× Yes I do because a lot of people had it and also using it when when I walk in the street they use a bike to transport.

Yes, I do, because a lot of people have them and use them; when I walk in the street I see people using bikes for transport.

Multiple tense and agreement problems: 'had' (past) should be 'have' to match present-tense 'I do'. 'It' should be plural 'them' to agree with 'a lot of people'. 'Using it' is a fragment; change to 'use them' for correct verb form. 'When when I walk' has duplicated 'when' and the tense should be present: 'when I walk... I see people using bikes for transport.' Suggestion: keep present tense throughout and ensure subject-verb and number agreement.

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