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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Uh, actually, I don't have a back, uh, for myself. Uh, it's a very pity thing.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I I think the bug is very popular in in China especially in recent years because a lot of city support share back you just using a QR code. You can you can find a bag you just using QR code to.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答需更直接和准确。首先要回答问题(有/没有),然后提供1–2个简短原因或细节。注意发音(bike 而不是 back),语法用过去时(had)。避免填充词如 uh, um,句子不超过5句。举例:说明为什么没有(家里没买、住在城市里靠公共交通等)。

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city and we usually used buses or the metro. Also, my parents thought walking was safer, so they didn’t buy one for me.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰并使用连贯的支持细节。先给出直接观点,然后用1–2个具体原因或例子支持(例如共享单车的普及、环保和交通便利)。注意用词和发音(bike, bike-sharing, city supports),避免重复。控制句子数并使用连接词如 because and therefore。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China, especially in recent years. This is mainly because bike-sharing apps have made it very convenient — you can unlock a bike with a QR code. As a result, many people use bikes for short trips and commuting.

Ngữ pháp

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× Uh, actually, I don't have a back, uh, for myself.

Uh, actually, I didn't have a bike for myself.

原句使用了错误的名词“back”且时态不符合对话(询问过去是否有自行车)。应使用“bike”并用过去时“didn't have”。建议:注意听写和拼写,回顾一般过去时的否定形式(did not + 动词原形)。

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× Uh, it's a very pity thing.

Uh, it's very pity.

虽然原句意思能被理解,但英语中更自然的表达是“It’s a pity”或“It's very sad.” 原句中使用“a very pity thing”是结构不自然。建议:使用常见固定搭配,如 'It's a pity' 或 'It's sad'。

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× Yes, I I think the bug is very popular in in China especially in recent years because a lot of city support share back you just using a QR code.

Yes, I think bikes have become very popular in China, especially in recent years, because many cities have supported shared bikes that you can use with a QR code.

原句存在多处问题:时态和结构不当(应表示从过去到现在的变化,使用现在完成进行或现在完成时更合适);词汇错误("bug"、"back"应为"bike");省略助动词造成句子结构混乱;缺少主谓一致("a lot of city support"应为"many cities have supported")。建议:使用现在完成时或现在完成进行描述近年变化,注意名词拼写,主谓一致以及定语从句的正确结构("shared bikes that you can use with a QR code")。

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× You can you can find a bag you just using QR code to.

You can find a bike and just use a QR code to unlock it.

原句预position/结构混乱并缺少动词形式:"using QR code to"结构不完整且"bag"拼写错误。应使用完整动词短语"use a QR code to unlock it"或"use a QR code"。建议:注意不定式和动名词的正确用法,确保句子有完整谓语和宾语。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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