Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct phrasing for age (e.g., "when I was about seven or eight") and combine related ideas into one or two sentences using linking words such as "so" or "and".

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was about seven or eight. I rode it almost every day to the local market and to visit friends, so I learned to balance and gained confidence riding on busy streets.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and support it with a specific reason and a brief comparison. Use correct expressions (e.g., "more popular in the past") and linking words like "however" or "because" to show contrast and cause.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are still fairly common, but they are less popular than before. In the past many people used bicycles for daily travel; however, because more families now own cars and public transport has improved, fewer people rely on bikes.

× I was almost 7 to 8 years.

✓ I was about 7 or 8 years old.

The original uses 'almost' incorrectly with a range and omits 'old'. Use 'about' for approximate age, use 'or' between alternatives, and include 'years old' to state age properly.

× I used to ride that bike and I I really loved loved it because I enjoyed riding it.

✓ I used to ride that bike and I really loved it because I enjoyed riding it.

There are repeated words ('I I', 'loved loved') and unnecessary repetition. Remove duplicate words. The structure 'used to' plus past verb and 'loved' is correct; keep 'enjoyed riding it' for clarity.

× Yes, actually bikes are quite famous in my country, but not as it used to be.

✓ Yes, actually bikes are quite popular in my country, but not as much as they used to be.

'Famous' is not the best word for popularity; use 'popular'. The phrase 'not as it used to be' has incorrect pronoun and missing 'much'; use 'not as much as they used to be' referring to bikes (plural).

× It used to be more popular before the ages but now less people use bikes as cars are mostly used.

✓ They used to be more popular in the past, but now fewer people use bikes because cars are used more.

Use plural subject 'they' for bikes. 'Before the ages' is incorrect phrase; use 'in the past'. 'Less people' should be 'fewer people' for countable noun 'people'. Reorder final clause: 'because cars are used more' or 'because cars are more commonly used.'