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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes I do, because in Kazakhstan, uh, bike, it's very popular sport.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Отвечая на этот вопрос, нужно прямо сказать, было ли у вас велосипед, а затем дать одну-две конкретные детали (например, кто подарил его, как часто вы на нём ездили или где обычно катались). Избегайте простого повторения вопроса; начните с утвердительного или отрицательного предложения, добавьте связку (например, "because" или "so") и ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was six, and I rode it almost every day around our neighborhood because it was a safe area for children.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Дайте более развёрнутый и естественный ответ: начните с прямого утверждения, объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример или контраст. Уберите заполнители («uh») и грамматические ошибки, используйте связки (например, "because", "for example", "however"). Ограничьте ответ 2–4 предложениями и добавьте более точную лексику (например, "popular" -> "quite popular for commuting and sport").

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Cycling is quite popular in Kazakhstan both as a sport and for commuting, especially in cities with bike lanes. For example, many people cycle to work in the warmer months and there are several local cycling clubs that organize weekend rides.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of nouns and articles

× Yes I do, because in Kazakhstan, uh, bike, it's very popular sport.

Yes, I do. In Kazakhstan, cycling is a very popular sport.

The sentence uses 'bike' incorrectly as a noun where 'cycling' (the activity) or 'bicycling' is appropriate. Also the article 'a' is missing before 'very popular sport'. The original also contains disfluent fillers (uh) and a comma splice ('bike, it's'). Use 'cycling' to refer to the sport/activity and add the indefinite article 'a' before 'very popular sport' to be grammatically correct. Additionally, separate clauses into two sentences or use a conjunction to avoid the comma splice. Suggestions: replace 'bike' with 'cycling' or 'bicycles' depending on meaning; add 'a' before 'very popular sport'; remove filler words; punctuate properly.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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