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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child, but finally the bag was stolen. But I remember that I used to, uh, cycling around our nearby park and uh, to talk with the neighborhood when I was cycling. I feel that kind of moment is so easy for me.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I think that's not popular in my country because of the heavy traffic and the danger in the road and let people not not to cycling and use back in the road. So I think it is cautious and I can understand it.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 在回答时要注意时态和语法一致,避免重复和填充词(如“uh”)。先用一句话直接回答问题,再用一到两句具体描述有助于得更高分。可以改进的地方包括:把时态统一为过去式(e.g. "I had a bike"),把“bag was stolen”改成更合适的词(e.g. "it was stolen"),并用连接词使句子更流畅。此外,减少无谓的重复并补充一两个具体细节(比如骑车去公园的频率或与邻居聊些什么)会使回答更充实。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it to the nearby park every afternoon, and I would chat with neighbours while taking breaks. I remember feeling carefree and safe during those rides.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并避免重复(如“两次not”)。用明确的原因和具体例子支持观点,使用恰当的词汇表达“道路危险/交通拥堵”。可以先简洁回答“不是很流行”,然后给出两三个具体原因并用连接词衔接(例如because / for example / therefore)。最后可以给出个人看法或预测。还要注意词语搭配,例如“not popular”后接“because of heavy traffic and road danger”更自然。

Ví dụ: I don’t think cycling is very popular in my country because roads are often congested and unsafe for cyclists. For example, drivers rarely give cyclists enough space, and there are few dedicated bike lanes. Therefore many people prefer using cars or motorcycles instead.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child, but finally the bag was stolen.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but eventually the bag was stolen.

原句时态混用:开头使用现在时“I have”但描述的是过去的经历,应使用一般过去时“had”。此外“finally”在这里用“eventually/ultimately”更自然。建议在叙述过去经历时全句保持过去时,避免时态混用。

8: Verb + -ing form

× But I remember that I used to, uh, cycling around our nearby park and uh, to talk with the neighborhood when I was cycling.

But I remember that I used to cycle around the nearby park and talk with the neighbors.

错误在于“used to”后应接动词原形(cycle),不是动名词“cycling”;另外“to talk”在并列结构中应与前项形式一致,用不带“to”的动词原形“talk”。“the neighborhood”在此处应为“the neighbors(邻居)”。建议记住结构“used to + 动词原形”,并保持并列动词形式一致。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I feel that kind of moment is so easy for me.

I feel that kind of moment was so special to me.

原句用词不当:用“easy”无法表达对记忆或时刻的感受,且时态应与之前的过去描述一致(was)。更自然的表达是用“special”或“pleasant”等形容词,并用“to me”表示对自己的感受。建议学习常用形容词搭配和保持时态一致。

1: Singular and plural issue

× No, I think that's not popular in my country because of the heavy traffic and the danger in the road and let people not not to cycling and use back in the road.

No, I don't think they're popular in my country because of heavy traffic and the dangers on the road, which prevent people from cycling on the road.

原句存在名词单复数错误及重复否定:“that's”指代复数“bikes”应使用“they're”;“danger”应用复数“dangers”或用不可数形式,并且短语“in the road”不正确,应为“on the road”。“let people not not to cycling and use back in the road”结构混乱,正确表达为“prevent people from cycling on the road”。建议注意代词与先行词数的一致、介词搭配(on the road)以及使用固定搭配“prevent sb from doing sth”。

6: Present tense issue

× So I think it is cautious and I can understand it.

So I think it's understandable, and I can understand that.

原句“it is cautious”用法不当,形容词“cautious”通常用来描述人而非情况。更自然的表达是“This is understandable”或“It's cautious to avoid cycling”。建议学习形容词的搭配对象,使用“understandable”描述情况或用被动/不定式结构表达谨慎行为。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
HeavyWeighty; Overweight; Forceful; Arduous; Onerous
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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