Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Content is good and personal, but phrasing, grammar and clarity need improvement. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Correct tense and word choice (e.g., “from about age 7 to 10,” “we would race down the hill”). Add a clear topic sentence, then a specific supporting detail using a linking word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I owned a bright yellow bicycle from about age seven until I was ten, and I rode it almost every afternoon with my elementary school friends. Because it was light and fast, I felt very free when I rode it, and we would often race down the hill near my house for fun.

Gợi ý: The answer addresses the question but contains several vocabulary and grammar errors that obscure meaning. Use accurate words (e.g., “bikes” not “bizarre”; “more common” or “popular” not “very popular now” awkwardly; “more convenient” or “safer” instead of “more confidence”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then support with specific reasons and a linking word like “because” or “however.” Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I don’t think bicycles are as popular now as they once were. When I was a child many people rode bikes, but today most prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more convenient for commuting.

× I had a bright yellow bicycle from about 8-7 to 10 and I used to ride it with my elementary school friends almost every afternoon.

✓ I had a bright yellow bicycle from about age 7 to 10, and I used to ride it with my elementary school friends almost every afternoon.

The phrase 'from about 8-7 to 10' is incorrect for expressing ages. Use 'age 7 to 10' or 'from about 7 to 10' to indicate the time period in childhood. This is a past-tense narrative, so 'had' and 'used to ride' are correct; only the age expression needed correction. Suggestion: say 'from about age 7 to 10' or 'from about 7 to 10 years old.'

× I loved it because it felt freeing and we would raise down the hill near my house.

✓ I loved it because it felt freeing and we would race down the hill near my house.

The verb 'raise' is incorrect here. The intended meaning is to move quickly downhill, so 'race down the hill' is appropriate. 'Would' with 'race' is fine for habitual past actions. Suggestion: use verbs with the correct meaning; 'race down' or 'ride down' are natural choices.

× No, I don't think bizarre very popular now.

✓ No, I don't think bicycles are very popular now.

The sentence has wrong word choice and missing verb. 'Bizarre' is incorrect — likely intended 'bicycles.' Also the copula for the subject is missing: say 'bicycles are very popular.' The present-tense opinion requires 'I don't think bicycles are very popular now.' Suggestion: ensure correct vocabulary and include the verb 'are' for present-tense statements.

× When I was young most of my friends had all their own bikes, but nowadays many people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more confidence.

✓ When I was young, most of my friends had their own bikes, but nowadays many people prefer motorbikes or cars because they are faster and more convenient.

There are several issues: 'had all their own bikes' is redundant — use 'had their own bikes.' The final word 'confidence' is the wrong noun; the intended adjective is 'convenient' or 'they are faster and more convenient.' Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: remove redundant 'all' and choose the correct adjective for convenience.