Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct basic grammar (past tense, articles), and give one or two specific supporting details. Keep it within 2–4 concise sentences. For example, say when you got the bike, who gave it to you, and a brief reason why you liked it. Use linking words (because, so, when) correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was seven because I loved energetic activities. I used to ride it to the park every afternoon, which helped me meet friends and stay active.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct opinion, then give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repeating phrases and unnecessary hesitations. Mention evidence (e.g., bike lanes, commuting, recreation) and use simple vocabulary accurately.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In recent years many cities have built dedicated bike lanes, so more people use bicycles for short commutes and exercise. As a result, cycling is now a common and convenient way to get around.

× Uh, when I was child, I'm so extremely, uh, kid because I love some actions and so I so get adorable about a bike.

✓ Uh, when I was a child, I was very playful and I really liked bikes.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing article before 'child' (needs 'a'), incorrect mixing of present and past tenses ('I'm' with 'when I was'), unnatural phrases ('so extremely kid', 'love some actions', 'so get adorable about a bike'). Use a simple past narrative for childhood: 'when I was a child' and 'I was very playful' and a clear expression of liking: 'I really liked bikes'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural collocations ('playful', 'liked').

× And when I was child, I, I want at my father the, uh, bike and he bought me.

✓ And when I was a child, I asked my father for a bike and he bought me one.

Errors: missing article before 'child' ('a child'), incorrect verb tense/verb choice 'want at' should be past 'asked' to match 'when I was', and missing object 'one' after 'bought me'. Also 'ask someone for something' is the correct prepositional pattern. Suggestion: use correct past tense verb 'asked' and proper preposition 'for', and include 'one' or 'it' when necessary.

× Well, I consider a considerable proportion of people in my country get adore about the bikes, However, uh, for this reason, government get expand the roads for bikes and therefore, uh, some of the roads will expanded about this reason and therefore, uh, the bikes, uh, well known in my country.

✓ Well, I think a considerable proportion of people in my country love bikes. For this reason, the government has been expanding bike lanes, so bikes have become well known in my country.

Multiple issues: unnatural verb choices and tense inconsistency ('I consider'→'I think', 'get adore about the bikes'→'love bikes'), missing article before 'government' and wrong verb forms ('government get expand' should be 'the government has been expanding' to indicate ongoing action), incorrect passive/tense 'will expanded' is wrong (use present perfect or present continuous), and repetitive connectors. Suggestion: use natural verbs ('think', 'love'), correct articles ('the government'), appropriate tense for ongoing policy ('has been expanding'), and concise phrasing ('bikes have become well known').