Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar (past tense and subject-verb agreement), clarity and conciseness. Start with a direct topic sentence using correct past tense, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like "but" or "so" correctly and avoid filler sounds (uh).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have my own bicycle when I was a child, but my brother did. However, when he wasn’t using it I sometimes borrowed his bike to ride around the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Make the response more organized and use precise vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, "because" and "so"). Replace vague phrases like "put oil or everything" with concrete terms such as "fuel" or "transport costs." Reduce fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work, which helps them get regular exercise. Also, cycling is cheaper than driving, so it saves money on fuel and public transport fares.

× When I shall I don't have a bicycle, but my brother have a bicycle.

✓ When I was a child I didn't have a bicycle, but my brother had one.

The original mixes incorrect modal 'shall' and present tense with past context. Use past tense 'was' for 'When I was a child' and past simple 'didn't have' and 'had' for possession in the past. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for past situations.

× And sometime when they didn't uh, use bike, I use instead for my brother.

✓ And sometimes when my brother didn't use his bike, I used it instead for him.

Errors: 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes'; 'they' is incorrect reference—use 'my brother'; 'use' should be past 'used' to match past narrative; 'bike' needs article/possessive 'his bike'; word order corrected to 'used it instead for him'. Suggestion: match subjects and verbs in number and tense and use correct possessives.

× So in the shield I don't have bicycle.

✓ So in the end I didn't have a bicycle.

'Shield' appears to be a mispronunciation of 'end'. The sentence mixes present 'don't have' with past context; change to past 'didn't have' and include article 'a' before 'bicycle'. Suggestion: use clear word choice and consistent past tense for past situations.

× Absolutely yes, because some people want to use bike for going to work because they can exercise in their life and then save, uh, money for put oil or everything.

✓ Absolutely. Some people want to use a bike to go to work because they can exercise and save money on fuel and other expenses.

Multiple issues: 'use bike' needs article 'a bike'; 'for going to work' is better as 'to go to work'; 'in their life' is unnecessary—use 'exercise' without it; 'save money for put oil' is ungrammatical—use 'save money on fuel' or 'petrol' and 'other expenses'. Tense is present general so present simple 'want' and 'can' are correct. Suggestion: simplify and use standard collocations: 'use a bike to go to work', 'save money on fuel'.