Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it when I was 7. I ride. I ride bike with my friends in the yard. What? Which makes me very happy.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think when I was a child, the bicycle is very popular in the child and but now in the modern city, many people will choose the public transform to school or to the company.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然流畅并遵循基本结构:先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2个句子具体说明时间、地点或感受,并用连接词使句子连贯。注意时态一致(过去事件应使用过去时),避免不完整或重复的句子。可以加一些具体细节,比如和谁一起、骑多长时间、学会骑车的经历等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a bright red bike when I was seven, and I used to ride it with my friends in the yard every afternoon. Riding together made me feel free and happy, and I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应更明确并使用连贯的连接词,同时注意语法和词汇准确性。先直接回答(Yes/No + brief opinion),然后给出具体原因和对比(过去与现在),并举例说明,如在乡村/城市的差异或公共交通替代的情况。避免词汇错误(例如“child”应为“children”,“transform”应为“transport”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles used to be very popular when I was a child, especially among children and for short trips. However, nowadays many people in big cities prefer public transport or cars because they are faster and more convenient, while bikes remain common in smaller towns and for leisure.
× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it when I was 7. I ride.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it when I was seven. I rode it.
错误类型:过去时问题。第一句和第二句使用了正确的过去时,但第三句使用了现在时“I ride”,与上下文中的过去时间(childhood)不一致,应该用过去时“rode”。建议:当描述过去发生的动作或经历时,统一使用过去式;数字“7”在正式写作中建议拼写为“seven”。
× I ride bike with my friends in the yard.
✓ I used to ride a bike with my friends in the yard.
错误类型:动词-ing形式/句子结构问题。原句用现在时“ride”且缺少冠词“a”,且描述过去习惯更合适用“used to”或过去时“rode”。建议:如果表达过去的习惯,使用“used to + 动词”或直接用过去时;名词“bike”前需加冠词“a”。
× What? Which makes me very happy.
✓ That made me very happy.
错误类型:句子结构问题。原句“What? Which makes me very happy.”结构不完整、代词使用不当。应使用“That made me very happy.”来指代前句并保持过去时一致。建议:用正确的指示代词(that)并与上下文时态一致。
× Yes, I think when I was a child, the bicycle is very popular in the child and but now in the modern city, many people will choose the public transform to school or to the company.
✓ Yes. I think when I was a child, bicycles were very popular among children, but now in modern cities many people choose public transport to go to school or to work.
错误类型:现在时/过去时混用、介词和词汇错误。原句把过去和现在时混用(“when I was a child”后却用“is”),名词复数和介词使用错误(应为“bicycles were… among children”),“transform”用错词,应为“transport”,“the company”应为“work”或“companies”。建议:注意时态一致;名词复数与可数名词前加冠词或复数形式;使用正确词汇(transport, work);将句子分成更清晰的两部分并用连词“but”。