Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a beautiful bike so it's black 1 so I like it very much.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, the bags are very popular in my country since in China, you know, we have a bigger population. So, uh, the bike are relatively cheap, everybody can afford and it's easy, you know, to ride a bike to go to.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、時態正確並具體描述。注意使用正確的時態(過去式),減少重複與填充語(如“so”過多),並給出一到兩個支持細節(例如誰送的、特徵或回憶)。句子不要超過五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a black bike that my parents bought me for my eighth birthday. I loved riding it around the neighborhood because it was light and easy to control, and I remember learning to ride without training wheels in the park.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需更準確與連貫。避免詞彙錯誤(如“bags”應為“bikes”),使用連接詞自然展開理由並給出具體例子或比較(例如城市通勤、共享單車普及)。句子結構應更簡潔,控制在五句以內。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in China. Because of the large population and crowded cities, many people choose bikes for short trips. In recent years, shared-bike services have also made cycling more convenient and affordable for commuters.
× Yes, I have a beautiful bike so it's black 1 so I like it very much.
✓ Yes, I had a beautiful bike; it was black, so I liked it very much.
此句出现在对过去的提问(Did you have... when you were a child?),因此应使用过去时态。原句用现在时(have, is, like)与问题时间不一致。建议将动词改为过去式:have → had,is → was,like → liked;并修改句子连接使结构更自然。
× Yes, the bags are very popular in my country since in China, you know, we have a bigger population.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because in China, you know, we have a large population.
原句中用词“the bags”明显与语境不符,应为“bikes”。另外“bigger population”比较对象不明确,改为“large population”(较准确且自然)。此处还将连接词“since”换成更口语常用的“because”。
× So, uh, the bike are relatively cheap, everybody can afford and it's easy, you know, to ride a bike to go to.
✓ So, uh, bikes are relatively cheap, everybody can afford them, and it's easy, you know, to ride a bike to get around.
原句存在主谓不一致:单数名词“the bike”应与动词“are”不搭配;应使用复数“bikes are”。此外,代词缺失,需用“them”指代bikes;最后片语“to ride a bike to go to”不完整且不自然,改为“to ride a bike to get around”(表达“骑自行车出行”更准确)。