BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes. No.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, because in our country if you buy a bike. They say that you are rich. If you can afford a bike, they will praise you.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 20.0

Gợi ý: Be direct and give a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 short supporting details. Avoid contradictory single-word replies. Use linking words if you add details (for example, "but" or "however"). Also keep answers natural and up to five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels, and I learned to ride it in my neighborhood park. However, I stopped using it often after I started taking the bus to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" or "for example"). Combine short fragments into full sentences and avoid repetition. Add one concrete detail (who praises, where, or an example) to make the answer more convincing and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they are seen as a status symbol. For example, people often admire someone who buys a new bike, especially in smaller towns where not many people can afford one. As a result, buyers sometimes receive compliments from neighbors and relatives.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes. No.

Yes, I did. No, I didn't.

The original reply 'Yes. No.' is unclear and lacks a proper verb. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use complete short answers that match the past-tense question 'Did you have a bike...?' The correct short answers are 'Yes, I did.' or 'No, I didn't.' Provide the full auxiliary plus subject to be grammatical and clear.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, because in our country if you buy a bike.

Yes, because in our country, if you buy a bike, people think you are wealthy.

The original clause ends prematurely and is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Completing the conditional with the main clause fixes the fragment. Also add a comma after the introductory conditional phrase for clarity. Finally replace 'they say that you are rich' with 'people think you are wealthy' for naturalness.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They say that you are rich.

People say that you are rich.

The vague pronoun 'they' is acceptable but can be unclear; this fits the 'incorrect use of pronouns' category (ID 12). Replacing 'they' with 'people' clarifies the agent. Keep tense and meaning consistent.

Sentence structure errors

× If you can afford a bike, they will praise you.

If you can afford a bike, people will praise you.

The sentence is grammatical but using 'they' is vague; this is best categorized as an incorrect pronoun use (ID 12) and also relates to sentence clarity/structure (ID 26). Replacing 'they' with 'people' makes the sentence clearer and maintains the correct first-conditional structure (present simple in the if-clause and future simple in the main clause).

Từ vựng trọng tâm

RichWealthy; Abounding in; Plentiful; Fertile; Strong
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