Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, sure.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think so because my country is not people drive the bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺少细节。根据评分规则,先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2句补充具体细节并使用连接词扩展内容。可以说明什么时候得到自行车、谁买的、骑自行车的频率或记忆来丰富内容。注意不要超过5句,总体自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven years old, and my parents bought it for me as a birthday present. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood, which helped me feel more independent and confident.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 句子语法和表达不自然,信息不够具体。应先给出清晰的主题句(Yes/No and brief reason),然后用1–2句具体说明原因并用连接词(for example, because, so)支撑观点,例如交通、文化或城市规划等因素。注意语法:使用正确的主谓结构和词序。
Ví dụ: Not really. In my country most people prefer cars or motorbikes because the cities are built for fast traffic and cycling lanes are rare. For example, during rush hour roads are crowded, so cycling is often seen as inconvenient and unsafe.
× I don't think so because my country is not people drive the bike.
✓ I don't think so because people in my country don't ride bikes.
问题类型涉及句子结构错误和代词/主语使用不当(对应题目列表中的“26: Sentence structure errors”和“12: Incorrect use of pronouns”以及“1/27: 单复数与主谓一致”)。原句中“my country is not people drive the bike”结构混乱:将地点主语(my country)与人(people)及动作(drive the bike)错误地结合,且动词时态与主语不一致。“drive the bike”也不自然,英语中谈到骑自行车用“ride a bike/bikes”。建议改为两种自然表达中的一种:1) “people in my country don't ride bikes” 或 2) “riding bikes is not common in my country”。这些改法把主语(people 或 riding bikes)与谓语正确配对,使用复数名词和否定形式,符合问题时态与语义。建议在口语中使用简单主谓结构(People in my country... / It's not common...)以提高准确性和流畅性。