Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and fillers (uh, um). Use correct verb tense and agreement, and more precise vocabulary (e.g., "my parents bought it for me," "training wheels").

Ví dụ: Yes. My parents bought me a small bicycle when I was a child. It had training wheels that helped me balance at first, and I remember feeling excited every time I learned to ride a little farther without them.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion, then support it with one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'however.' Reduce hesitation words and finish sentences clearly. Use precise terms (e.g., "electric scooters, cars, public transport").

Ví dụ: I think traditional bicycles are less popular now because many people prefer electric bikes and scooters, which are faster and more convenient for commuting. However, bicycles remain common for exercise and short trips in parks and residential areas.

× Yes, I have a bike run with a little child, it's my parents brought for me and I I still remember at that time my bicycle have a uh too little exaggerated wheels and they help me to more to balance when I ride it.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my parents bought it for me. I still remember that my bicycle had very small training wheels that helped me balance when I rode it.

Problems: incorrect tense and pronoun use, repeated word, and incorrect verb forms. Identified types: 5 (Past tense issue), 9 (Verb in the past participle form - 'brought' used incorrectly here as simple past vs context), 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns - 'it's my parents brought for me'), 27 (Subject-verb agreement) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). Correction details: use past tense consistently for childhood events (had, bought, remembered, had, helped, rode). Replace 'it's my parents brought for me' with 'my parents bought it for me' to use correct subject and verb order and pronoun 'it' referring to the bike. Change 'have' to 'had' for past possession. Replace awkward phrase 'too little exaggerated wheels' with 'very small training wheels' for clarity. Suggestions: keep verb tenses consistent (use past for past events), avoid repeating words, place pronouns near their antecedents, and use simple, clear noun phrases like 'training wheels.'

× Well, I think since the umm, electric bike is coming, the bike is not really popular now in my country and now people have more choice about uh, transport, so they maybe they will choose more uh, convenient and more.

✓ Well, I think that since electric bikes have become common, regular bicycles are not as popular in my country. Now people have more choices for transportation, so they are more likely to choose more convenient options.

Problems: tense and number mismatches, awkward modal use, and sentence incompleteness. Identified types: 6 (Present tense issue), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 4 (Modal verb usage), and 26 (Sentence structure errors). Correction details: use present perfect 'have become' to indicate a change that has happened up to now. Use plural 'electric bikes' and 'regular bicycles' for general statements. Replace 'the bike is not really popular now' with 'regular bicycles are not as popular' for clarity. Change 'they maybe they will choose more uh, convenient and more' to 'they are more likely to choose more convenient options' to correct modal usage and complete the phrase. Suggestions: choose the correct tense to express change over time (present perfect), keep noun number consistent for generalizations, and avoid filler words; use concise modal constructions like 'are more likely to.'