Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Especially nowadays, you can see a lot of people read backs on the road and they want to improve their bodies.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,但过于简短且缺少细节。应在主题句后补充具体细节,例如你什么时候拥有的自行车、它的样子、你如何使用它或记忆中的一次经历;使用连接词使回答更连贯。注意句子自然性,可用更地道表达如“I used to have a bike”或“I had a small red bike”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with a basket at the front, and I rode it to visit my friends every afternoon. I remember learning to ride it in the park, which was a bit scary at first but very rewarding. Overall, it gave me a lot of freedom and happy memories.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答给出观点但存在语法与用词错误,且细节不够具体。应纠正错误(如“read backs”应为“ride bikes”或“use bikes”),并提供具体原因、场景或比例支持观点,使用连接词如“because”或“for example”增强逻辑性。避免笼统表述,说明是出于健康、环保或交通方便等原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people choose to ride bikes because it is cheaper and better for fitness, and several cities have developed dedicated bike lanes. For example, I see commuters cycling to work every morning, and bike-sharing programs have become very common recently.
× Yes, I think so. Especially nowadays, you can see a lot of people read backs on the road and they want to improve their bodies.
✓ Yes, I think so. Especially nowadays, you can see a lot of people riding bikes on the road and they want to improve their health.
问题类型:动词 + -ing 形式(Verb + -ing form)。原句中用的是“read backs”,这是错误拼写且动词形式不正确。正确表达指“骑自行车”,应使用动词短语“ride bikes”并用现在分词“riding”来表示正在进行或普遍现象。此外“improve their bodies”不如英语母语表达自然,应改为“improve their health”(改善他们的健康)。建议:把“read backs”改为“riding bikes”,并将“bodies”改为“health”。另外注意拼写和固定搭配的正确性。